Alright you bunch of incels, listen up. I've seen a increase of brain-dead comments lately so I'm gonna say it straight. Since 90% are unintelligent monkey's. This is a story that's going to be told. If you're looking to self-insert yourself into the MC then leave. He won't bang things on the spot or killing random people cause uwu they didn't agree with me. If you want to read incel type novels like that, there's plenty of others on this site. Seeing as how the author won't regulate his reviews or comment section cause he's lazy. I'll do it, if he deletes this then good on him. He does things that seems weird or 'Why can't he do this or that since he's an Outer God'?, Ever heard of story telling? It's to make them interesting, to add drama, to add suspense, it's to tell a story. Reading perfect protagonist becomes stale over time, and you get triggered since your can't self-insert.
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LIKETo add to this, if you can't retain information, or remember things mentioned in past chapters that will be relevant, then get out. 'Why is X higher than y.' (Chapter 1) A paragraph before that TELLS US THAT DEITY CLASSES ARE NOT IN ORDER, are you willfully ignorant or outright stupid? 'Why is he doing a dogs work? Why is he being a middleman for the three factions?' CHAPTER 3, AZAZEL AND JIN HIMSELF OUTRIGHT STATES THAT HE'S DOING IT TO HAVE AN EASIER TIME MEETING WOMEN IN ALL FACTIONS, PANTHEONS AND MYTHOLOGIES. Without the need of beings going: 'Why are you here? Who are you?' My god, my hope for this websites reader base is sinking lower and lower. You either just skim through chapters or don't have the brain power or capacity to remember any information in long chapters.
Those are just some true facts abt wn readers. I feel like they can only give a 1 or 5 star review with nothing informative. Besides that the only thing they read is mainstream trsh. Your review is also pretty informative an written nicely. Now I know what to expect from this story. 👍
Penemue:To add to this, if you can't retain information, or remember things mentioned in past chapters that will be relevant, then get out. 'Why is X higher than y.' (Chapter 1) A paragraph before that TELLS US THAT DEITY CLASSES ARE NOT IN ORDER, are you willfully ignorant or outright stupid? 'Why is he doing a dogs work? Why is he being a middleman for the three factions?' CHAPTER 3, AZAZEL AND JIN HIMSELF OUTRIGHT STATES THAT HE'S DOING IT TO HAVE AN EASIER TIME MEETING WOMEN IN ALL FACTIONS, PANTHEONS AND MYTHOLOGIES. Without the need of beings going: 'Why are you here? Who are you?' My god, my hope for this websites reader base is sinking lower and lower. You either just skim through chapters or don't have the brain power or capacity to remember any information in long chapters.
Your point is contradictory. He is a completely overpowered character with an arbitrarily flawed character but that’s good story telling? It’s just a frustrating read. If you can’t comprehend people’s criticisms maybe you should grow up and develop. Also using Incel to describe people who are pointing out the mediocre story writing is really embarrassing. It’s an op mc harem dxd fanfic, if you enjoy this you’re an Incel.
bro its already 1 years.....
Dxiubbcce:Your point is contradictory. He is a completely overpowered character with an arbitrarily flawed character but that’s good story telling? It’s just a frustrating read. If you can’t comprehend people’s criticisms maybe you should grow up and develop. Also using Incel to describe people who are pointing out the mediocre story writing is really embarrassing. It’s an op mc harem dxd fanfic, if you enjoy this you’re an Incel.
Oh, what a sensitive little snowflake you are! Are your feelings hurt because I exposed how utterly pathetic and cringeworthy your opinion is? Seems like it. Let me break down your feeble attempt at criticism, so you can join the rest of us in the real world. First off, you think you're some sort of high and mighty literary expert because you're dissing a character who's "overpowered and arbitrarily flawed." Honey, please! An overpowered character is the epitome of a captivating story. It's like you're purposely missing the point. Would you rather read some wimpy, underdog story? Boring! A well-rounded character is someone you can relate to, but also have polarizing traits. The author has managed to create an intriguing balance, so keep your shallow opinion to yourself. By claiming that it's "frustrating to read," it seems like your reading comprehension skills need major improvement. Troubling to read? Oh, please! You must have a really low tolerance for thrilling narratives. Maybe you should focus more on self-development than dictating what other people should read. Oh, and you think calling someone an "Incel" is the epitome of insults? You must be living in a cocoon if you believe that. Darling, if you think this story is mediocre, then yes, you're an Incel. It's a simple fact. Embrace it, sweetheart. In the world of fantasy and fiction, this story is a smorgasbord of action-packed adventure and passionate encounters, which is a far cry from your monotonous, indecisive, and often pathetic vision of mediocrity. Let me break it down for you in simple terms: you have no idea what you're talking about. You're using your privilege and societal lens to degrade something you don't understand. You've probably never read a proper fantasy novel and are just trolling to fit in with the crowd. I bet you sit around in forums like this, waiting for people to criticize so you can jump in and vomit your insipid opinions. So listen up, small-time critic: if you can't handle the heat, stay out of the kitchen. Your childish attempts at literary critique may fly in some lame schoolyard, but they don't hold water here. Now, take your bitterness and sit it down somewhere else. No one wants to hear your pathetic attempts to undermine everyone else's opinions. Go find a reality check (I heard they're available at your local librarian) and stop trolling. Better yet, pick up a copy of the book and try to learn something new, since you're clearly lacking in knowledge about the genre. Final advice: learn to respect people's opinions, or at least be prepared to read some harsh truths. Grow a thicker skin or avoid the internet altogether. Keep your childish rhetoric to yourself, unless you want to be schooled by someone who actually appreciates quality literature. Also end yourself
Dxiubbcce:Your point is contradictory. He is a completely overpowered character with an arbitrarily flawed character but that’s good story telling? It’s just a frustrating read. If you can’t comprehend people’s criticisms maybe you should grow up and develop. Also using Incel to describe people who are pointing out the mediocre story writing is really embarrassing. It’s an op mc harem dxd fanfic, if you enjoy this you’re an Incel.
Your whole reply is extremely ironic and hypocritical. I can't believe people like you exist.
Penemue:Oh, what a sensitive little snowflake you are! Are your feelings hurt because I exposed how utterly pathetic and cringeworthy your opinion is? Seems like it. Let me break down your feeble attempt at criticism, so you can join the rest of us in the real world. First off, you think you're some sort of high and mighty literary expert because you're dissing a character who's "overpowered and arbitrarily flawed." Honey, please! An overpowered character is the epitome of a captivating story. It's like you're purposely missing the point. Would you rather read some wimpy, underdog story? Boring! A well-rounded character is someone you can relate to, but also have polarizing traits. The author has managed to create an intriguing balance, so keep your shallow opinion to yourself. By claiming that it's "frustrating to read," it seems like your reading comprehension skills need major improvement. Troubling to read? Oh, please! You must have a really low tolerance for thrilling narratives. Maybe you should focus more on self-development than dictating what other people should read. Oh, and you think calling someone an "Incel" is the epitome of insults? You must be living in a cocoon if you believe that. Darling, if you think this story is mediocre, then yes, you're an Incel. It's a simple fact. Embrace it, sweetheart. In the world of fantasy and fiction, this story is a smorgasbord of action-packed adventure and passionate encounters, which is a far cry from your monotonous, indecisive, and often pathetic vision of mediocrity. Let me break it down for you in simple terms: you have no idea what you're talking about. You're using your privilege and societal lens to degrade something you don't understand. You've probably never read a proper fantasy novel and are just trolling to fit in with the crowd. I bet you sit around in forums like this, waiting for people to criticize so you can jump in and vomit your insipid opinions. So listen up, small-time critic: if you can't handle the heat, stay out of the kitchen. Your childish attempts at literary critique may fly in some lame schoolyard, but they don't hold water here. Now, take your bitterness and sit it down somewhere else. No one wants to hear your pathetic attempts to undermine everyone else's opinions. Go find a reality check (I heard they're available at your local librarian) and stop trolling. Better yet, pick up a copy of the book and try to learn something new, since you're clearly lacking in knowledge about the genre. Final advice: learn to respect people's opinions, or at least be prepared to read some harsh truths. Grow a thicker skin or avoid the internet altogether. Keep your childish rhetoric to yourself, unless you want to be schooled by someone who actually appreciates quality literature. Also end yourself
You about to get cook🙏🙏😭😭
VisionaryVision:Your whole reply is extremely ironic and hypocritical. I can't believe people like you exist.
It’s very interesting how someone can say so many conrodictory things and yet still believe themselves to be righteous and correct (alternatively I have fallen for the bait)
Penemue:Oh, what a sensitive little snowflake you are! Are your feelings hurt because I exposed how utterly pathetic and cringeworthy your opinion is? Seems like it. Let me break down your feeble attempt at criticism, so you can join the rest of us in the real world. First off, you think you're some sort of high and mighty literary expert because you're dissing a character who's "overpowered and arbitrarily flawed." Honey, please! An overpowered character is the epitome of a captivating story. It's like you're purposely missing the point. Would you rather read some wimpy, underdog story? Boring! A well-rounded character is someone you can relate to, but also have polarizing traits. The author has managed to create an intriguing balance, so keep your shallow opinion to yourself. By claiming that it's "frustrating to read," it seems like your reading comprehension skills need major improvement. Troubling to read? Oh, please! You must have a really low tolerance for thrilling narratives. Maybe you should focus more on self-development than dictating what other people should read. Oh, and you think calling someone an "Incel" is the epitome of insults? You must be living in a cocoon if you believe that. Darling, if you think this story is mediocre, then yes, you're an Incel. It's a simple fact. Embrace it, sweetheart. In the world of fantasy and fiction, this story is a smorgasbord of action-packed adventure and passionate encounters, which is a far cry from your monotonous, indecisive, and often pathetic vision of mediocrity. Let me break it down for you in simple terms: you have no idea what you're talking about. You're using your privilege and societal lens to degrade something you don't understand. You've probably never read a proper fantasy novel and are just trolling to fit in with the crowd. I bet you sit around in forums like this, waiting for people to criticize so you can jump in and vomit your insipid opinions. So listen up, small-time critic: if you can't handle the heat, stay out of the kitchen. Your childish attempts at literary critique may fly in some lame schoolyard, but they don't hold water here. Now, take your bitterness and sit it down somewhere else. No one wants to hear your pathetic attempts to undermine everyone else's opinions. Go find a reality check (I heard they're available at your local librarian) and stop trolling. Better yet, pick up a copy of the book and try to learn something new, since you're clearly lacking in knowledge about the genre. Final advice: learn to respect people's opinions, or at least be prepared to read some harsh truths. Grow a thicker skin or avoid the internet altogether. Keep your childish rhetoric to yourself, unless you want to be schooled by someone who actually appreciates quality literature. Also end yourself
