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Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv142yr
2022-06-25 03:51

Recommended 4.6 . ... There are basically almost no errors in this..... neither are any grammatical ones.. . ~Mc is smart ~Willing to grind for power ~A.I chip & world merge is new element. ~fun, slice of life, romance and action packed story ~Characters ars almost to the point, which is good for immersion in story. ~Characters themselves have plot & are not one dimensional .. ~Author put in lot of work for power balance .. well done 👍 Review till chapter 36 & mc is still in his first world.....

REWRITE IN PROGRESS

RyanFic
4.8
53 Chs

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OutofideasLOL
OutofideasLOLLv13

You have grammar mistakes in your review though....

2yr
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Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

So, your point ? Did I ask you to review my review 🤣

OutofideasLOL:You have grammar mistakes in your review though....
2yr
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arekuruutento
arekuruutentoLv12

Young_fruit_Smiley:So, your point ? Did I ask you to review my review 🤣
2yr
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OutofideasLOL
OutofideasLOLLv13

I didn’t realise I had to ask for your permission to comment…

Young_fruit_Smiley:So, your point ? Did I ask you to review my review 🤣
2yr
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

i am delighted that you realised it now.... . now I am giving you permission .... to live happily after you review my review 😄... . enjoy it young padawan... !!👍

OutofideasLOL:I didn’t realise I had to ask for your permission to comment…
2yr
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Ibbedhand
IbbedhandLv1

Wonderful piece of work. Worldbuilding ✅ Clever MC ✅ Great Plot ✅ Spoiler! I agree with the author about balancing power levels. In DBZ, Piccolo/master Roshi destroying the moon is outrageous when compared to now, DBS, when most of Goku's enemies have Trillions of power levels. Any random blast, especially from Brolly, who doesn't have much control over his power output, should have the power to completely destroy the earth. And yet, during the battle between Goku and Brolly, it did not happen. Which for me, is saying something. I believe the destructive power of Dragonball universe is too much of a bug. The author's take to balance it here is a very good decision. Especially since it's not only the Dragonball universe. 8.5/10 overall.

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Alien_Space_Bat
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After reading 32 chapters i can definitely say it's one of best fanfictions available in the webnovel at this point. Author definitely made a combination world with good background for the fic and its pretty interesting already. It also have an MC who has a better character unlike the edgelords or goodies in the webnovel. There is only negligible mistakes and updating stability is also good. Hope Author will complete the fanfiction and quality of the fic doesn't degraded over time.🙇🙇🙇👍👍🙏🙏

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Br4tsch
Br4tschLv14

So yea First of all i had to drop the story. Because its just to frustrating. He has a gravity chamber, an AI for erverything (he even got, throught the AI, the best training plan even possible ) and is a Reincarnator Furthermore he is a Sayajin. Till now you would think noice and kinda unique idea with the crosover of Marvel Onepiece, Naruto and DB but then you read the first few chapter and get to know that he could even improve his DNA even better right? But the out of nowhere a 10year training time skip. But that isnt the problem the problem is how the f could one increase ones power lvl only by ~60k With all the above advatages ???? just the f And how are the only 5stars reviews i call bots. So year your decision And thanks for reading my frustration.

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The_Crimson_Abyss
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Nice novel and it deserves 5 🌟 . ..........................................................................................................

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IHaveNoNamingSense
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mythoscribe
mythoscribeLv13

Five stars for more chapter please update faster I am loving this fanfic and i need more of it if you could upload daily it would be awesome.Anyway its not just for more chapter the fanfic deserves five stars with great story and excellent writing quality and devlopement

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SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

I gave five stars because I can also can you maybe have raven as his love interest so you can have a whole arc of him fighting her father. ------------------------

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Nidhin_Vijay
Nidhin_VijayLv4

A really good piece of work so far.. I just hope the release frequency stays good... The author has seamlessly merged the worlds.. in a way we could've guessed.. but probably never did,,, Having a hard time waiting for future chapters..

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A_Yellow_Koala
A_Yellow_KoalaLv14

Enjoying the story so far.

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