Review Detail of Pingviini in Become a Mangaka in Genshin Impact

Quite a lot of small mistakes written, though I can forgive that, many authors don't have a translator for their work other than Google, DeepL and the like. The pacing goes quite fast. Characters start acting OoC by chapter 15 or when MC is trying to seduce them. Their thoughts seem to even make excuses for why they are acting this way. Way too many crass MC thoughts about his pants tightening up when just thinking about the women. Yeah, there is perv MCs, but still, too many times. Dropped