Review Detail of Pragmatico in Plundering in the Apocalypse
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Read while it was free to chapter 50. The grammar and over all structure of the story is good. The world background can use some touching up to explain the layout of the city and the world it self size wise and where they are compared to other places. The MC ability is similar to others I’v seen in the past but still has its own twist. Update stability is tye only real complaint over all but every author has their own limit and time restraints wish the author success in his endeavor
Plundering in the Apocalypse
Dakshay
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As I said every author has their own pace and that’s fine. Hope you can build up your world as well and let the readers know the full extent to which you have fleshed it out
Dakshay:Thank you for your review. I am ashamed about the update stability. As for world-building. You are right. I am soon going to express it properly. There are only a few things I have explained. Guess I was taking it too slow.image