I read what was free as a reference point. The whole academy parts feels so forced and cliche it ruins the stories flow. I can see him not wanting to kill humans and get back into society but he knows nothing of the world and us the readers by extension. The grammar needs work as well due to changing of tense when telling parts and misspelled or just the complete wrong word at times. The flashes of what I assume is the future also don’t help the story in my opinion but to each their own. I was looking forward to a monster mc story but now he is week and pretending to be human
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