Good story, I'm an honest reviewer so don't think I'm hating on the story or anything. Actually, I guess I am. The character design and story are 1 star everything else can take a 5 star.
Harlyboy
Liked it!
LIKEAnyways don't worry about the rating I'll probably delete this when I wake up. I recognize that such low ratings aren't good. Tried writing one of these myself but couldn't stick to it. keep up the good work. I'm going to sleep.
Harlyboy:how many chapter did you read?
Not entirely relevant, but about 20% of your story. Since you couldn't give me a solid character and plot to get behind what's the point in reading further? Waste of time. Since you're the author I'll justify. Character is down to personal preference, but the story's development only leaves you thinking: so what, why?, who cares. Now as a reader if I'm left with any of those it's just a huge red flag.
Harlyboy:how many chapter did you read?