the concept is quite good but the writing quality is bad...repeated words and grammar aside, his and her are mixed, wrong words used for a lot of things, and sudden Japanese word used in between breaks the flow. characters are also described in a young master's way... It's a good time to pass if you can gloss over these detail while reading.

Writer here. Thank you for friends who have come to read this story. For those who like it, welcome and for those who don't like it, no problem. I just want to write down the ideas that are in my head. Besides, this fanfiction has poor translation. So I hope you guys can endure it. And also for anyone who wants to rewrite fanfiction, just send your email. I'll send you the original later. Currently there are 20 chapters.

It's an interesting story. I look forward to more chapters. The are a few grammatical errors which are still readable but may be somewhat annoying. All in all it's a new fanfic with an interesting concept and I believe it has a lot of potential.

I quite like this story, I had never seen something like this in a one piece fanfic, I would appreciate it if you didn't leave it as it is a very good fanfic.

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yo this is a super goed story, i am not going to lie the writing quality is not the best but its good enough, but i never read anything like this, I LOVE IT!!!!, but don't over do it, make your own plans and tempo, dont over work youself.

Terrible quality, worst editing i have ever seen. Some mistranslations are so bad i have never seen them even while reading MTL

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