Review Detail of 0Mashroom in My boyfriend can control the darkness

'll say after reading this story, will be on my good she t list, the writing itself was great although the dialogue is sometimes confusing, but the character do the heavy lifting from their design and interaction, the world building is one thing a mystery still don't know what comes after next, I'll be sure to read this from time to time. Overall try making the dialogue clear and easy to read next time, kudos for the aurthor