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My warning for new readers is that there is a lot of BS in this. I understand what the author was trying to do in the introduction but the execution was just plain awful. The timeline is messed up. And political marriage needs a bit more convincing.

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Amazing concept for a story. The charctar development is great and the power level are well thought out many people usually make konoha weak during its foundation forgetting that many people from the warring period are alive and the senju and uchiha are at their peak The world background is also stable and without weird stuff forcibly put into the world so far im looking forward to see the development

all in all a good read with a new concept , i also realized some things related to islam and tbh it's interesting that you made the prologue out of it cuz this is the first ... i think ? and the MC is not dump and a pushover so it's good cuz i guess ... the only problem is that it's a little fast paced and there are not many character screens like for example he met luffy but there was not any interactions between them , you just time skipped that scene and some others .

After reading the synopsis I think the fic has potential. Never seen an hiruzen si fic, so it's a first for me. Also I see some idiots spamming low reviews just caz it's harem. So......

Ok, I listened to the author about the unfair assessment. And I will appreciate the work. I'm still unhappy with the harem sheet and recommend removing it, otherwise there will be the same problems as with me.

I HATE HAREM! BUT I like how MC transmigates into Hiruzen Sarutobi. I like how it's pre cannon and set at the beginning of when he becomes Hokage. But seriously though there's not many Hiruzen Sarutobi fanfictions set at this time or at the beginning when Konoha was established (if there is please share). Anyways can't wait for further development of the village and the exploration of One Piece world. Can't wait for the next update.