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DumbDolphin
DumbDolphinLv142yr
2022-05-24 20:30

I'll say this, this fic is complete and utter nonsense. The MC was kidnapped for almost 1 whole year. The moment he got back home and called his mom, she reacted unlike a normal person, who would ask questions and worry. Instead, she just act like she has just seen him 3 hours ago. This fic does not make any sense at all.

Pokemon Ultra Sun and Moon Rom Hack

komega
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komega
komegaAuthor

I mentioned that she thought that they were on a vacation. There are also Pokemon who can use illusion. Although I wanted to mention this later, your lack of patience forced me.

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AEGIR123
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More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more harem more

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Titan106
Titan106Lv2

I was liking the story until you mentioned that many more people could use the powers of the pokemon, I mean how funny would that be? Then there would be no need for pokemon, and do you seriously think that Arceus, the pokemon god, would let so many people walk around with powers that can literally destroy cities? I say why do you think there are so few Aura users and Psychic users?

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MrSheta
MrShetaLv10

It could have been a great story, but it became a really bad thing since ch 10, putting more hybrid cuts everything special from the prota, adding that they actually hit him every time, he almost looks like a perverted background pj that has some strength , I just need to say "you're looking for death" for me to say that this is a Chinese or Korean ff... Disappointing because it was very interesting...

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Beta_000
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just p w/o p... Dont even bother searching for plot is somewhat readable surprisingly... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ......................................

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Cursed_Twilight
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Reveal spoiler

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Darth_Ullyses
Darth_UllysesLv5

it is good. but could be better. . sooooo MOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOARMOAR

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Passing_Through
Passing_ThroughLv14

Woah a pokemon game rom hack based fanfiction. Its a first for me. Generally people would follow the canon anime with just a bit different on the side or oc in the canon story making a mess. Or just stupidly realistic and dark version of the pokemon world. This one is really overdone. Like where the fun in that where it lose the basic reason of why i like pokemon is the fantasy and adventure element in the first place. Continue author. I think you can do better. Surpass your limit.

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Daoist5Ocjku
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