Story and plotline are amazing, will keep you interested for a long time. Updates are stable enough. The only downside is the Bad grammar but well the Author's mother tongue is not English so it's kinda expected. But well I have seen worse English in mtl sites and if you can read them destroying your brain cells just to satiate your Boredom then you should give this fanfic a try. I hope other's understand and don't underrate this Novel. Since Author is giving it for free and despite his bad English he is trying his level best. If too many negative comments come for Author then he might just abandon this Novel so it's better if you guys just ignore the grammar part. If anyone want's to be a translator for Author he/she can contact Author though he/she won't get paid so please keep that in my mind.
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Thanks for such a wonderful review men I love people like you such a positive review
Can you improve the Grammar and make it more readable it's good story, want to read it but very confusing due to bad grammar. Earlier chapters are full of mistakes and make the story unreadable.
GodOfGreedAs:Thanks for such a wonderful review men I love people like you such a positive reviewimage
I am trying my best
Alien_Space_Bat:Can you improve the Grammar and make it more readable it's good story, want to read it but very confusing due to bad grammar. Earlier chapters are full of mistakes and make the story unreadable.
is there a difference between this story and you're other one??
