webnovel
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv132yr
2022-06-18 16:22

I just cant understand your mc. He is dumb for sure, acts like he isnt but yeah dumb for sure. He went to become slave and got himself a bounty, for what? Mc want to train he says, mc want to tap onto his potential by eating he says, then cant he just do this stuff all in the forest and go out? Nah instead he went off to show off his powers with total lack of plan. It was a turn off and i dropped by then. Still there s nothing wrong with the ff. I cant just stomach his dumbness.

Avatar: Shadow of The Gambler

blazuki
4.8
26 Chs

Liked by 5 people

LIKE
Replies1
Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

Thanks I always hate dumb MCs.

2yr
3
Other Reviews
G404
G404Lv4

I really hope it's a harem, (when it's confirmed that it's going to be a harem, could someone let me know by replying to this comment?, like I hardly read if it's not a harem ,obs I promise to give at least 1 power stone a day if it's harem, mainly because I know the author is very good and his stories are good) (this isn't some kind of bribe, it's just a harem hope that's all)

2yr

Sphinx57
Sphinx57Lv13

author is this gonna be full on adventure and pack with action? or are you planning on the future adding harem or romance? Because I wouldn't mind if it's just adventure and action

2yr
NEETsemsalvasao
NEETsemsalvasaoLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
esperomejorar
esperomejorarLv1

no hay romance? ...................................

2yr
spectra_phantom
spectra_phantomLv4

Please don't mess with the balance of the fanfic by making mc a lot of ops, be strong but just gamble for the sake of not trusting the system, consider the possibilities and do things that seem almost impossible according to him, but please look again, please don't be too op, instead of being too strong, he should have perfect control over his above average power I hope you don't leave this avatar fanfici for a long time (pls love affair with azula)(I use google translate, sorry if anything is too rude)

2yr
8Mysterious8
8Mysterious8Lv4

I really hope it's a harem, (when it's confirmed that it's going to be a harem, could someone let me know by replying to this comment?, like I hardly read if it's not a harem ,obs I promise to give at least 1 power stone a day if it's harem, mainly because I know the author is very good and his stories are good) (this isn't some kind of bribe, it's just a harem hope that's all)

2yr
G404
G404Lv4

I really hope it's harem, if it's confirmed can someone let me know? .

2yr
Said_Palacio
Said_PalacioLv13

It's blazuki I know I can trust his fanfic [img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar][img=actualizar]

2yr
Usernameeeeeeee
UsernameeeeeeeeLv2

Ы[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
Related Stories

Marvel : I'm in Westview Town

________ Finn travels to the timeline after Avengers: Endgame and obtains a system that hides one's own strength while allowing him to grow even stronger! However, he soon discovers that the system's prescribed hiding place is actually Westview! Before long, Wanda will seize control of the entire town, plunging countless people into pain and torment. Fearing exposure and determined not to give up halfway... Finn decides to act first—conquer Wanda and resolve the issue at its root. And thus, he embarks on a road of no return. Here's the cliched NOTE : English is my 3rd language so I'm not proficient in that , so if there are any mistakes please point it out to me ________ Dear Readers Join Patreon for 40 Advance Chapters https://www.patreon.com/UK21 ...... Give it a try

Uzumaki_Kushina_21 · Anime & Comics
4.1
82 Chs

Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy

Fujii Itsuki unexpectedly found himself in Konoha on the night of the Kyuubi rampage. Although it was a dangerous situation Itsuki still survived. His Isekai life was as dull as it gets, he didn't have any talent for being a shinobi nor did he have a system. Itsuki was prepared to live his life as a lazy bum but unexpectedly he received a summons from the Third, only to find out a piece of shocking news. " Itsuki I have arranged a marriage for you, the other party is Uzumaki Kushina, I hope you will agree to this marriage " Facing the request of the Hokage, Itsuki could only reluctantly agree while apologising to Minato who died a few days ago. It's not like he wanted to steal his wife but he was threatened into it. 'Sorry Minato, But don't worry I will raise Naruko like she is my own child and take care of Kushina well, and never let her feel any loneliness' Itsuki's seemingly ordinary life was turned upside down due to a single event. *************** Discord link : https://discord.gg/AyFd3NRMTA This is inspired by an MTL novel. This is not a translation. But just in case you want to get a glimpse of the dumpster fire I will leave a link. Link: https://www.mtlnovel.com/naruto-forced-to-marry-narutos-mother-at-the-beginning/ Pat**on: patreon.com/Life_Sa_Beach

Life_sa_Beach_ · Anime & Comics
4.7
136 Chs

Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System

After transmigration or perhaps reincarnation, Mahiro Toma decided to pursue a career as a light novelist. However, everything changed when he read the name of his new school on the notice board. "Wait, Kouh Academy?!" "Isn't this the school from Highschool DxD?" This is the story of a man who finds himself in the fantasy world of Highschool DxD with the unique ability to travel to various anime worlds to grow stronger. Worlds: 1. Highschool DxD 2. Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? (Danmachi) 3. Sword Art Online (SAO) 4. ... --- For advance chapters: patreon.com/heavenlydawn Please Note: I do not own any of the content in this fanfiction. The copyrights belong to their respective creators.

heavenlydawn_ · Anime & Comics
4.5
235 Chs
Login