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NecroFan
NecroFanLv32yr
2022-07-04 14:59

This is a wonderful story with flaws of course. Some minor spelling mistakes but nothing that impacts the experience of reading this. Ultimately the main problem I have is with where the story seems to be going. 1. I’m fearful of a harem as those usually mean fanservuce. I Think maybe more than 1 girl going after the Mc in a romantic rather than fan service swnse is better. 2. Add grimoire chapters where you show us all the spells our MC knows 3 (more of a request) please allow our MC to delve into necromancy a lot. IT is just an enjoyable concept to me lol. Anyways, keep up the good work. This is an excellent story with great potential.

Paragon of Death

3_Sins_Studios
4.5
691 Chs

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3_Sins_Studios
3_Sins_StudiosAuthor

I assure you, you will see more of the death magic soon. It is rarely used because the MC is not in a position where he can use spells comfortably. Remember he is keeping his ability hidden for now

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NecroFan
NecroFanLv3

That is true. But I seriously do suggest you make chapters just for the spells our mc knows so we can remeber them. Maybe every 20 chapters you restate the spells. I do remeber him getting a grimoire. It would be nice to see his spells and abilities in them

3_Sins_Studios:I assure you, you will see more of the death magic soon. It is rarely used because the MC is not in a position where he can use spells comfortably. Remember he is keeping his ability hidden for now
2yr
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