I've read this till chapter 17 before and forget about it but just today I remembered and read it again till chapter 38 'A Yandere'. My take on this novel/fanfic that spans endless and llimtless worlds is this - The writing Quality is amazing, I couldn't find any mistakes till now, maybe there are a few but they'd be minor. The story development although would be fast paced in the Naruto world alone it's pretty relaxing if we're talking about an outerversal level fanfiction, I've seen way faster pacing and i like this how it is. The character Design is... well very descriptive, especially the personalities and the people who are Manipulated. The Updating stability isn't the fastest but has a lot of quality. And finally the world's background is pretty complete, stuff about the MC and FMC is revealed gradually & the Naruto world in a whole is paced right and described right, can't imagine how you remember all these details, maybe wiki?
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LIKET.L.D.R - Overall this Novel is pretty polished and in all aspects contains quality, going to wait for more updates so keep it up!
Thank you for the review. xD *Happy author noises* I use a site to confirm Naruto timeline and as for ninjutsu and stuff, I’ve read all the big 3 more than once so🌝
Yeah, I just started making a Naruto fanfic with the main problem being I don't remember most things but the major ones, maybe some stuff but not in detail. I'm also too lazy to read or watch Naruto again :-)
Pastlives:Thank you for the review. xD *Happy author noises* I use a site to confirm Naruto timeline and as for ninjutsu and stuff, I’ve read all the big 3 more than once so🌝
I definitely cannot imagine someone writing a fanfic with detailed numbers on the Konoha Calander, it just scares me.
Vryssix_Vorithion:Yeah, I just started making a Naruto fanfic with the main problem being I don't remember most things but the major ones, maybe some stuff but not in detail. I'm also too lazy to read or watch Naruto again :-)
This is the site I use. It’ll be easier to place events together like this🌝 Read the first ch of your fanfic, it was good. And starting at the Uchiha Massacre is also a good idea.
Vryssix_Vorithion:I definitely cannot imagine someone writing a fanfic with detailed numbers on the Konoha Calander, it just scares me.
Thanks for the site!
Pastlives:This is the site I use. It’ll be easier to place events together like this🌝 Read the first ch of your fanfic, it was good. And starting at the Uchiha Massacre is also a good idea.image
