This story is where the incredible amount of practice at writing Cam gets with his commissions shines through, highly recommended. Has a really solid update rate that has been sustained consistently over a long period so you don't need to worry about him dropping the story either.

You have great writing skills, that alone would've been enough for many of us readers... Yet your in-depth knowledge of the game and immersion towards the characters has made a masterpiece the majority. I can hardly wait to see how this goes.

First off the grammer is excellent in this novel. The update stability was good when releasing or at least I seen from other review’s. Charcter design not bad at all good description’s. The Backgroud of the lore for Elden Ring is superbly done. Now for the story which for me had it’s up’s and down’s overall. I’ll get the negative’s out of the way the women of the novel make conparison’s with their former spouses with the MC. Even one’s pressence being hinted to be affecting one of the harem girl’s. Giving those Cuck me vibes for the MC. He doesn’t save every girl in Elden Ring. Well those that are mentioned but never show up or do but die. Also some yuri vibes yeah take that what you will. Even personally wasn’t a fan every stinking time I’m thinking author really? At least have the MC present but no it’s at the end but two women go off and do their own thing. Hard Cuck vibes once again. If your expecting any tension in the story the MC is OP so enough said. His charcter can be a bit one dimensional being the silent MC. He’s not whiney like other MC’s so that’s a plus. His charcterization come’s from’s his expression’s which is either smile, shake’s head, and stare lol. The method’s he use’s to save the girl’s seem’s legit some at the same time I’m not so sure. The thing that really bugged me was the wedding and the dividing the women based off status. Not having them married all at once really ticked me off. Given it was a clear divide on who the MC was showing favoritism toward’s at least in my view. I felt each girl could have been fleshed out more and had more interaction’s with the MC. It felt rushed at times the romance and contrived. With some girl’s falling in love way too soon for my taste. Overall these my raw and honest thought’s on the novel. The postive is the aformentioned grammer,worldbuilding,and charcter design. Hope this helped anyone peace.

the story was good the writing was good the only problem is the yuri towards the end kinda ruined it for me but everything else up to that was a good read

Disliked the yuri towards the end, almost ruined it for me but it's fiction and I can delete it from my own head cannon of the fic. If I do so 9/10

Came for the Plot, and stayed for the actual plot, who would've thought? I've been following Cam's great works through different platforms for a little while, so imagine my surprise when I was reading the summary and only out of the corner of my eye, see his name and found out he also had an account here? Honestly... now that I think about it while writing this review, it probably shouldn't have surprised me at all... Anyway, back to reviewing the actual work: Amazing, really. Solid and just consistent quality all over. Also, as someone who loves Elden Ring (well, DS games in general), the effort that he's put into it in terms of lore, and even making the more nonsensical or, as he likes to call them, "fill-in-the-blanks" things feel real and fitting... Is rather mind-blowing. I ate through the story in a day and a half, expecting it to be something for me to read on the side to just read something, but my word did it hook me. I can safely say that you have given me my Perfect Ending now, Cam. Exactly what I wished was possible for me to do in all those runs I've had and hundreds of hours looking for alternatives that even the mighty wikis don't know of, so for that, Thank you.

naaa bastatnte entretenido mi hermano mi comi todos los capitulos en 1 dia assssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

ive reas this several times, but now i gotta ask, will there be a part two for the dlc?

Good fan fiction, really enjoyed it on QQ. Your first first fic that I read, now I'll be happy to look at the rest. I recommend reading, in our time there are not so many Elden Ring fanfictions, and this one is also quite well written [img=recommend]