Review Detail of Frizepize in Terminator: New Fate
Review detail
pretty so far at chapter 9 but NGL It got it cringey for a little and boring with so cliché things like saving stuff and killing bad guys mc personality is looking at things black and white(good and evil) I haven't seen any dark situation that dark tag was unnecessary and poorly made touches of how people talks, slightly good Grammer than most novel I watched. but some horrible Grammer novels still has a lot of exciting and surprisingly amazing situation, etc but sadly this one was the opposite all in all : it's boring and garbage. a hot and good garbage nonetheless slow and good development for the author but I could not say the same from the novel
Terminator: New Fate
JaceKendrix
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oh, ignore me complaining.. just what you always do best and you would be capable of and be confident about it just don't bring your imagination and creativity into your novel to a burnout and complete drain
JaceKendrix:Thanks for the review. So, what do you suggest I do to make the story be not so boring. Any suggestions might help improve my writing skills.
Thanks. I really appreciate any feedback from my readers. They really help. As an author, I may have all of these intense, thrilling images and scenes playing inside my head, but my readers, you guys, might not be experiencing the story the same way. This means that I still have something to improve, and reader feedback is how I get to know that. So, you guys should keep 'em coming.
Frizepize:oh, ignore me complaining.. just what you always do best and you would be capable of and be confident about it just don't bring your imagination and creativity into your novel to a burnout and complete drain