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here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review. this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah ..
Monarch of Gluttony: System of Sin
Izekiel
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Izekiel:And by short sighted, I meant from your side. Like there are tens of things you can complaint about in first 30 chapters regarding MC's actions, but the eating thing that you made the core of your anger after reading just the first chapter... instead of considering that there might have been more to the situation than met the eye... very short sighted And with that, I'm done answering objectively to your review. Have a great dayimage
That's much better. And now that you've objectively pointer out the issues, I can also objectively answer. your assumption is incorrect . How did it become cultivation world? There is not even a concept of cultivation? And now about your initial complaint about MC eating and being stupid. Firstly, regarding him eating food from King of pride, The Sin of Pride doesn't work like that. It doesn't make one go crazy if their pride if hurt. Secondly about him being stupid enough to eat and think he'll be safe, that comes into future chapters where the situation is explained more, about how this situation was manipulated in such a way where he had to do it. And thirdly, he had relationship with the King of Pride in the past, which also clouded his perception. The first chapter doesn't tell all this at once. It goes more into the backstory that's slowly highlighted in coming chaps, especially in ones where he meet the King of Pride. Just because the concept of Tower is used, that doesn't make it a Korean Copy or a cultivation novel. Then again, I respect your assumption and your ability to see the future through first chap, no matter how wrong.
One last thing. The main character has many flaws, as every person does. Humans aren't supposed to be perfect. What you might do in a situation, depends widely on a person. He did quite a lot of things that one person might find right, and another might find wrong. However, what you pointed out about eating? Out of all the flaws of MC that could've been chosen, including his short temper, or anger, you chose the only thing that was explained and planned. The eating... That was quite short sighted honestly.
Izekiel:That's much better. And now that you've objectively pointer out the issues, I can also objectively answer. your assumption is incorrect . How did it become cultivation world? There is not even a concept of cultivation? And now about your initial complaint about MC eating and being stupid. Firstly, regarding him eating food from King of pride, The Sin of Pride doesn't work like that. It doesn't make one go crazy if their pride if hurt. Secondly about him being stupid enough to eat and think he'll be safe, that comes into future chapters where the situation is explained more, about how this situation was manipulated in such a way where he had to do it. And thirdly, he had relationship with the King of Pride in the past, which also clouded his perception. The first chapter doesn't tell all this at once. It goes more into the backstory that's slowly highlighted in coming chaps, especially in ones where he meet the King of Pride. Just because the concept of Tower is used, that doesn't make it a Korean Copy or a cultivation novel. Then again, I respect your assumption and your ability to see the future through first chap, no matter how wrong.
And by short sighted, I meant from your side. Like there are tens of things you can complaint about in first 30 chapters regarding MC's actions, but the eating thing that you made the core of your anger after reading just the first chapter... instead of considering that there might have been more to the situation than met the eye... very short sighted And with that, I'm done answering objectively to your review. Have a great day
Izekiel:One last thing. The main character has many flaws, as every person does. Humans aren't supposed to be perfect. What you might do in a situation, depends widely on a person. He did quite a lot of things that one person might find right, and another might find wrong. However, what you pointed out about eating? Out of all the flaws of MC that could've been chosen, including his short temper, or anger, you chose the only thing that was explained and planned. The eating... That was quite short sighted honestly.
Izekiel:And by short sighted, I meant from your side. Like there are tens of things you can complaint about in first 30 chapters regarding MC's actions, but the eating thing that you made the core of your anger after reading just the first chapter... instead of considering that there might have been more to the situation than met the eye... very short sighted And with that, I'm done answering objectively to your review. Have a great dayimage