Izekiel
Someone who couldn't change the world. So he started making worlds of his own. Thanks for checking my profile. Discord: Izekiel#2519
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Satisfied? All new authors have to struggle for reviews since we don't have any advance reader followings. I literally had to promise a mass release in exchange for getting my first ten reviews and that's when I had 500k views. Even then I had to wait for 3 weeks before I reached 10 reviews. So before accusing someone, maybe think twice. The world doesn't revolve around you bro. 1 million views with 150 chapters doesn't mean you'll get 1000 reviews.
You can copy paste and give that same review with 5 stars, and it'll still be selected, just like two of my 5 star reviews were gone since they mentioned "f***ng awesome" or something similar terminology. If you remember that review, try posting it again at any time you prefer and see if it's shown on the review page lol
And by short sighted, I meant from your side. Like there are tens of things you can complaint about in first 30 chapters regarding MC's actions, but the eating thing that you made the core of your anger after reading just the first chapter... instead of considering that there might have been more to the situation than met the eye... very short sighted And with that, I'm done answering objectively to your review. Have a great day
One last thing. The main character has many flaws, as every person does. Humans aren't supposed to be perfect. What you might do in a situation, depends widely on a person. He did quite a lot of things that one person might find right, and another might find wrong. However, what you pointed out about eating? Out of all the flaws of MC that could've been chosen, including his short temper, or anger, you chose the only thing that was explained and planned. The eating... That was quite short sighted honestly.
That's much better. And now that you've objectively pointer out the issues, I can also objectively answer. your assumption is incorrect . How did it become cultivation world? There is not even a concept of cultivation? And now about your initial complaint about MC eating and being stupid. Firstly, regarding him eating food from King of pride, The Sin of Pride doesn't work like that. It doesn't make one go crazy if their pride if hurt. Secondly about him being stupid enough to eat and think he'll be safe, that comes into future chapters where the situation is explained more, about how this situation was manipulated in such a way where he had to do it. And thirdly, he had relationship with the King of Pride in the past, which also clouded his perception. The first chapter doesn't tell all this at once. It goes more into the backstory that's slowly highlighted in coming chaps, especially in ones where he meet the King of Pride. Just because the concept of Tower is used, that doesn't make it a Korean Copy or a cultivation novel. Then again, I respect your assumption and your ability to see the future through first chap, no matter how wrong.
It will work once a day at most, but 6 is the total limit. It's like you have 6 candies but you can only eat one a day
When everyone is racist, no one is racist
the inventory that keeps items recieved rewards from system. Nothing else.
Those are really cool names
Still worth explaining since it was a query.