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2022-05-27 13:57

The story starts with a hot scene making readers wonder about the whole character. Though the writing is good, there are some small mstakes with commas and line separation. The world building is good but it would be even better to go a bit more into details to 'show' and not just tell. The work is unique with werewolf and CEO, two famous tags of webnovel. The work will improve with time and I believe the author can do it, I especially like strong FML so seeing more of miss CEO won't be any bad~.

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Cultured Beggar is here to give his appraisal! First of all, I've got to mention the author's others works, especially the 'Seasons of Colors' which got me fascinated. It was one of the few books that I greatly enjoyed reading. And from what I see, this new book the author created should be of much better quality than SoC. After reading the first few chapters, this is my appraisal. Writing Quality: Top notch! Vast vocabulary, yet used simple words most would understand. Grammar errors? Little to none. Simply, high grade! The way the author depicts vivid scenes is commendable! Story Development: If you don't feel hot right now, then you can call me liar. This book is too dem engaging! Try it! This book carried a taste I usually smell to those successful books. Hopefully my guess will be right! Character Design: Simply awesome! Both the FL and the ML are 3 dimensional! I really appreciate it! The duo's character, when weaved into something romance has immense potential! Particularly the FL, she's so hot~ Updating Stability: No idea, the book was only at 4 chapters atm. Yet, it already hooked me. I hope the author will write more. And fast. World Background: If it isn't interesting, then I'll give you the right to be my girlfriend~ hehe Jk, the WB is wonderful! I can vividly picture it! And it leaves you curious about the power structures and the powers of the people. Overall: The author did well in her three golden chapters (chapters 1-3). Add to the intriguing synopsis, it made me look forward to where this book will reach! Goodluck author! Enjoy writing! I'm looking forward to this book's future! Sincerely Yours, Cute Beggar

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