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TFHLv62yr
2022-07-18 21:04

So... Zero No Tsukaima 2.0?. I may read it but i hate WN locks. For now i will add it and read it later and when i do i always give my honest opinion on things. If i didn't like something, i will at least always tell you why and help out with ways to improve.

Picking up Girls With My System

Ryongul
4.6
473 Chs

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RyongulAuthor

thanks [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] That anime is good but man the mc gets me angry sometimes

2yr
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TFHLv6

Since you answered my review so fast i will give it a read. Hopefully MC gets an stamina boost and D boost since he will need them. You cant have a working and harmonious hârêm without a big D and huge stamina, along with charisma. (Truth)

Ryongul:thanks [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] That anime is good but man the mc gets me angry sometimes
2yr
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RyongulAuthor

You need that stamina to *work* for hours right?

TFH:Since you answered my review so fast i will give it a read. Hopefully MC gets an stamina boost and D boost since he will need them. You cant have a working and harmonious hârêm without a big D and huge stamina, along with charisma. (Truth)
2yr
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TFHLv6

Well... i have read upt to chapter 5... and i must say... you have a lot of plot holes lol... The grammar is really good. The Rl8 parts need more work and pls remove the licking floor thing... unless you are into that i recommend delete that part. its really bad taste. Lastly, i recommend you THINK before and after you write. If i make the mc do this or make that even happen... what could happen, what will happen and so on. A good example is. Unless the academy is 100% isolated, with absolutely no way to contact the outside, and is completely autonomous with no trade to the outside for products. Then news about MC is already out. The girls can sent letters outside, use magical ways to deliver news and what not. Its an academy and parents would want ways to contact their children at least. the teachers can do the same, they can definitely sell the news about the mc to the outside for money.... even the workers at the restaurant can say that a MAN IS INSIDE THE ACADEMY. Its a 100% girls school, and suddenly a man appears inside? news are bound to be know across the whole kingdom within a week.

Ryongul:You need that stamina to *work* for hours right?
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RyongulAuthor

Shameless update. The story starts out slow with the MC being weak, and clueless about the world he lives in. He will get a bloodline on the future(already has by chapter 20ish) and then things will start to speed up, and there will be more action. I can't spoil the story cz I think it will ruin the experience, so I'll hope you give it a try and see for yourself if its your cup of tea.

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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;) 17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp

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TianZunZheLv3

I'm just a culture man. So, i will give 5 star. ..................................................................................................

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Alibi_LullabyLv5

I don't have the energy to actually write a review so imagine 'The Familiar of Zero' but without a beta slave MC and not wanting to return to earth or annoying characters.

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Ruby_banks02Lv13

An interesting book I found and began to love. I like Arthur(the MC). The characters are okay and the plot of the book is good for sure! I hope the author keeps writing.

2yr
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SoBoredLv15

Are there eventually s*x scenes.

2yr
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B_L_A_C_K_SoulLv14

For a book about lemons, the lemons are far too short. This novel would have been better either without lemons or with more thought out encounters with longer lemon scenes.

2yr
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DemonWolf_69Lv4

Oh my gawd, I haven’t read the book but sheesh! What a holy book cover! Ima gib 5 stars just for that, I’ll read da novel later maybe… :)

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Acromat1calLv12

Honestly this is the first review I am writing on the webnovel app. This story was a really good read especially for me as I like these types of genres! The only bad part is the locked episodes (although it's more enjoyable when free, it does support the author). Hoping for more episodes to come!

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