Hi all. I am Russian and write through Google Transliteration. I was able to last until chapter 36. You know, I'm not very picky. In my entire life, I have read, probably, more than 5000-6000 thousand fanfictions and books. I myself officially publish and sell books. I have seen a lot, seen worse, but now about something else. Let's start with the basics: the system. The main character, literally on the first day, was able to pump so much that he would subjugate the whole city. Excess power level as in the world of the future (Power level 100 player level). The hero subjugated all the admins of the game, but preferred to farm with his hands. Okay, I thought, maybe this is such a feature. But that's where everything else came in. A thousand plot blunders and holes. Intelligence at the level of a 14 year old child. This will be said, perhaps to offend the author, but do not make the hero 28 years old if you, as I assume, are no more than 16-18. I myself am almost 30, I know the thoughts of a person of 30 years and they are not so ... white and black. Let's move on to something for which I give stars. The quality of the writing? - It's not for me to judge, I'm Russian. (It's not the best, I'll put 4 stars) Update stability? - I can’t judge either, because I didn’t even finish reading the story (but not the best, 3 stars) Story development? - one. Terrible development, because it does not exist. A simple enumeration of achievements (but at least something) Character design? I would put, honestly, zero, but there is no such thing. There is no character development, no thoughts, not even dialogues. World background - 0, no difference from the original work, if you had not read the overlord, you would not have understood what the world was about.
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Охх мой славянский бро, тут так сложно найти нормальные фанфики! Кровь из глаз! Есть что почитать? Мне нужна доза!
