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2022-05-28 06:47

I was fully engaged during the first chapter, the scene was tense and gritty, but the pace seemed to slow down a bit in the later chapters. I assume we are still early on in the story and that might explains why I’m not sure what direction it’s heading, but overall I love this, and I LOVE the author’s fearless writing style. Nicely done!

QT: Finding Meaning

Raychbunni
4.6
207 Chs

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Raychbunni
RaychbunniAuthor

Thank you for your positive review, as my first it holds a special place in my heart <3 The pace should speed up soon, I am just trying to find a balance between getting the story across and it not being sped up so the reader doesn't get as emotionally involved in the plot and characters. Hopefully, I achieve that soon. Yes, there is a LOT more to the story than shown so far, I want my archs to be 3D and be mini novels in themselves rather than like in some QT novels where the archs feel like quick 2D stories if that makes sense? Thanks again, hope I continue to entertain.

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Grammar of this story is just amazing, author. 🦋 The first chapter is a little bit confusing, but you have to read further to see the main plot slowly developing, mind you that chapter two leaves you with a proper cliffhanger. I personally was surprised lol The main lead seems to be intricated, it’s hard to like her at first, but then when you read more, you slowly begin to understand why she’s like this and what exactly is going on.🤧 The first chapter was too detailed, sometimes we have to leave some for our readers to imagine for themselves. Besides that, this book’s name can be misleading to some people, not showing the main point, it’s differs from the plot, which is just exceptional and inimitable. I think that Webnovel should do a better job while promoting this book, it deserves a lot of praise. 👏🏻 🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋

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The feeling of the theme and the narration of the events are so good that I felt like I was reading one of the world-famous classic novels for a moment. The author is very successful in reflecting the feelings and thoughts of the characters. It may not appeal to everyone because it has a heavy air, but I think it will easily draw those who read novels on this theme. Good work author👍

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I got hooked from the very beginning. I love the way you expressed the FL and ML emotions to the situation at hand. And as I read further, the pace slowed a bit but picked up pretty quickly. Your writing style also gets me and I definitely want more from you.

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