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2022-05-23 22:25

writing quality is definitely a 5, as for stability of updates im putting 4 in hopes that update would be consistent but since we're not even at chapter 20 right now I will put 4 rather than 5, story development is 4 for me, its well executed and written but the fact remains its not exactly an original concept , character design is 4 as well since the author can at least give a detailed description of his characters unlike some other novels I've read which can be summarized as 'Jade skin, sharp nose, phoenix eyes', world back ground is 4 star since the world isn't exactly original is it, but I'm putting it at 4 because as the story progress the author do give relevant information pertaining to what is being mentioned meaning even newcomers without knowledge to the original source would have a context to stand on overall 4.2 and I do recommend it as one of the good fanfics to read on this horni infested site of webnovel

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