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Ashwatthama
AshwatthamaLv42yr
2022-06-10 03:17

I will give it 1-star cuz I find it super Boring. <-_- But I will also leave some honest thoughts: The writing quality is good. He knows how to write a novel. Chp is not too short, nor too long. Proper format for everything. Now, what is this novel about: SLICE oF LIFE ik author already told it, but still since this is the main theme of the novel. i decided to point it out again. Some authors write even slice-of-life OP stories in a very interesting manner. So most people enjoy it. But this one seems boring to me. Maybe only me. MC acting cute and all. I am no fan of such. Instead, the facts that starting chapters are just filler, and this author drop 3chp/week. I am like TF? But then again I realized it is a slice of life. So that's it, I just didn't like it. but you guys still give it a try. maybe I will come back and read it later when this novel has 40 or so CHP. so I can skip past the boring chp faster. But for now, I am out.

Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

SlimeSage
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95 Chs

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TruTatsuya
TruTatsuyaLv3

its finished will you write another review

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SlimeSage
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NObody
NObodyLv4

I am gonna think MC looks like this.

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GotaDeAgua
GotaDeAguaLv4

We start off well, a "Solo leveling" story and it takes place in Japan, its powers are good and somewhat daring. However, it's funny how relatively new authors think that asking for money at the beginning... Correction, financial support for a story that is clearly a failure would be correct. First of all the pesonage is absurd, he is supposedly an old war veteran, with an incredible maturity and coolness to make decisions. Then the author forcibly decided to add forced interaction to claim such a silly love interest. Not to mention that he completely ruined the world development by making the dungeons appear 30 years earlier because he doesn't even know the world in which the story takes place. Cliches and references to typical Japanese novels.... Wrong verb tenses and points of view, scene jumps and internal thoughts used at the wrong times. After chapter 2, everything is absurd.

2yr
B0r3d_Guy_1
B0r3d_Guy_1Lv13

Pretty childish writing so far with all the standard cringy stereotypes however its a cool concept for a story (superman in solo leveling) and has plenty of room for improvement and should be pretty cool if done well. But still very early days atm.

2yr
Honest_dude
Honest_dudeLv1

I had a lot to say on this in my mind but i couldn't express it in words properly, but i had the feeling every time I read a chapter in this novel, and i found the word to describe it "cringe".

2yr
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

don't read if you want to keep your brains... the only good thing about this story is the stability of posting, and apart from the writing, nothing else can be considered even average.(it's just bad)

2yr
abu_saeed
abu_saeedLv4

The story would have been a lot better if the Mc wasn't so old. [Chapter 05] - Isn't this Elementry? Are children this age doing these things? The story made it seem like it was normal. I can understand that children were dumb, why were teachers acting like that? was the rich kid paying the teachers? If the teachers are this easily swayed, How is this school so popular or has a high reputation that Mc's parents who are so influential people agreed to admit Mc here? Did they not do any background checks? Isn't 20 families losing their jobs too much, they didn't do anything their only fault is that their children are dumb. And where did the Drugs and Blackmailing come from, wasn't it just bullying? Did Mc's dad frame the teachers?

2yr
TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

Everything about this is mid. Grammar and character interactions, the MC, the world. Everything is just MEH. Its not even worth reading to pass the time honestly. It just missed that mark. So maybe its below MEH 🤔 well, whatever

2yr
RandomPasserby96
RandomPasserby96Lv14

pretty boring, weird relationship with the kid... k

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