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PleadingCatLv32yr
2022-06-24 14:49

Writing Quality ★★★ •Many things are translater or was written wrongly or not aligning to what it should be, some are also connected with each other without spacing ex: Iwillkill your... Story Development ★★★★ •It's a solid 4 for me because of its superb story pacing, 2 scenes are kinda forced but it's still good. Character Design★★★★★ • The way the author gave life to every character and how he/she can make the audience understand how they feel is already chef kissed. Although in the original world there's still some ladder being climbed for the MC to mature it still show its good potential. Updating stability★★★★★ • Might change it later.... World Background ★★★★★ • Since MC is being put to different world or should I say 'virtual world' it gives the story different vibes and different backgrounds but since it's still on the trial and onky released 20 chapters it has potential. This is one of the great trial novel I've read here on this site couldn't believe they actually put something new or kinda 'new' which is pretty much better than the other "novel" which is basically a copied version of a copied version of the original novel. I'll give this one a solid 4.4 and I gladly recommend this... You got my vote....

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Does this novel have romance?

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It does but it's just subtle..

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finally, an actual review 👏

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Hello! I am pleased to recommend my novel "Beyond the Supernatural" to you, a work that will take you through a supernatural world full of mysteries and exciting adventures. Thank you for your time and consideration!

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