Story is pretty good overall until you get to the paid chapters and then it feels like author gave up. Translation is different. Characters attitudes and dialog become cardboard. Author needs to work on flushing out the world (we know almost nothing about the world after 50 chapters), and better flushing out the characters so they aren’t so one dimensional. The concept and originality are good.
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