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So all these people studying the magical nature of the world and every single one of them jump to unverified conclusions so easy. This book is getting really boring with the same face slapping for stupid assumptions over and over and over and over and over.

Story is pretty good overall until you get to the paid chapters and then it feels like author gave up. Translation is different. Characters attitudes and dialog become cardboard. Author needs to work on flushing out the world (we know almost nothing about the world after 50 chapters), and better flushing out the characters so they aren’t so one dimensional. The concept and originality are good.

What happened to [sin eater]?? He has used it on undead and zombies before, but hasn’t even experimented with it on this floor. Is the barrier made of energy? Why not try to drain it? It has been able to convert so mamy other things including the zombie curse. Or is this just an overlooked inconsistency, like the experience points, stat pages, and/or levels.

First, this book still needs to be edited. The author keeps promising one, but I am past chapter 200 and it is still atrocious. Every paragraph has at least one typo. That’s not including the occasional weird, and nonsensical sentence structures, or the poorly identified conversations. It makes the book hard to read. The author does a good job with the story telling and world building. But, I am starting to see the errors in consistence that start to plaque many web novels. I am to the point I am not sure I will continue to invest my time in the story.

He was already past level 61. He lost 2 level for healing his fiance. Then he completed the quest that added plus 3 levels. And that doesn’t even count the 10 billion xp that was suppose to take him to level 70 or 80. Was this just thrown out the window, forgotten, or purposefully ignored by the author. While I am at it, is there ever going to be an editor? right now you are still averaging 1 mistake per paragraph, not chapter, paragraph.