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Bright_Gabriel_9341
Bright_Gabriel_9341Author2yr
2022-12-25 16:33

Based on the numerous comments I've seen in this work, I believe it's appropriate to write another review. First and foremost, I apologize if you find too much jargon in this tale. I'm not trying to appear clever, but I'd want to find an easier way to explain my views. I don't want to beat about the bush with many words and wind up in this cycle of explanation, so I'll use one or two vocabulary to explain my idea clearly. Another aspect of this work is its formative stage. The first stage involves the MC interacting with himself and the outside environment. The MC depicted his perspective on the world and the people around him. The approach may be self-serving and hence cause readers to dislike the MC; nonetheless, his paranoid vision of the world is due to his experience. The interaction of the MC and other characters is the book's second phase. With time, I fleshed out all of these crucial characters and provided a memorable encounter that moved the narrative ahead. The world is the final stage. I brought the world to life by bringing forth the viewpoint of invisible characters to move the plot ahead. This novel is primarily about intelligence and brain use. Although it included martial arts, that was not the focus of the novel (at least for now). However, martial arts will play a crucial role in the plot's conclusion. Thanks again for visiting, and Merry Christmas 🎄.

Peerless Mind.

Bright_Gabriel_9341
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341 Chs

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Daoist_machinegod
Daoist_machinegodLv1

I've noticed that as well. I don't hate the MC's view of the world. He's outspoken and sometimes thinks of himself as perfect while everyone and everything is flawed: a funny way to think. Regardless, he's outspoken and I love it. Moreover, (according to my progress) he's not too concerned about the world. In short, whatever you say there corresponds with my progress. Keep writing ✏️

2yr
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Man_god
Man_godLv3

I think so too

2yr
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SmilingDaoist
SmilingDaoistModerator

Well explained

2yr
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Not_in_town
Not_in_townLv3

I think I will enjoy this story then...I love brain work...

2yr
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Penning_dreams
Penning_dreamsLv13

I'm the same person as Daoist_machinegods but the acct is now invalid. This one will be my current acct.

Daoist_machinegod:I've noticed that as well. I don't hate the MC's view of the world. He's outspoken and sometimes thinks of himself as perfect while everyone and everything is flawed: a funny way to think. Regardless, he's outspoken and I love it. Moreover, (according to my progress) he's not too concerned about the world. In short, whatever you say there corresponds with my progress. Keep writing ✏️
2yr
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Bright_Gabriel_9341
Bright_Gabriel_9341Author

welcome back. And thanks for sticking around even after your reborn😂😂

Penning_dreams:I'm the same person as Daoist_machinegods but the acct is now invalid. This one will be my current acct.
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