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  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_93418 months ago
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    The writing quality of the work is great. The pace is slow and building, setting the room for the followup scene. The character design for the main character, especially is done well. Nice one overall and keep up the good work.

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_93418 months ago
    Commented

    Nice one, Geegee. A good opening that have set the pace for subsequent actions.

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_9341a year ago
    Replied to makindeonirinwa

    Happy new to you too, man.. Sorry for my late reply. I usual don't visit my author page anymore. For that, write 4 chapters and submit. It should have specific word count but I can't remember. It will go through normal (or general review) and after it's approve people can then see your book and send their power stones and wrote review. Then, After you continuously meet the update, and your book is marketable and interesting, webnovel well them pass your book for contract. But at that time, your book must have reach about 50 chapters.. Or more or less, depending on certain factors. If you're more popular, your book can easily gain traction and get contract as long as it's not violating any rules...

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_9341a year ago
    Replied to makindeonirinwa

    Happy new year, Makindeonirinwa, upload 4 - 5 for system review after that, continue uploading. And they will do the usual SE review and once your book qualifies, you'll be offered a contract.

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_93412 years ago
    Replied to makindeonirinwa

    Is it not under your profile?

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_93412 years ago
    Replied to makindeonirinwa

    How many chapters you want to have on ground before you begin to release is upto you. But you should have at least more than 10 or 20. Different people have different capacity they can release a day. Most people write one chapter a day, others write two. When I mean write, I mean, already edited novel that's ready for release. But in life there may be other factors that may influence how you wrote and what you write. Many of them may come from internal or external. Especially when your novel. Isn't doing very well that it looks like you're the author as well as the reader. It could be tiring, thereby influencing your output, especially if it's only novel that you write and nothing else. As for why novels flop... Well, there are many things... All I can say is that readers tastes differs.. Not even the best novel author could claim to write something everyone would appreciate. I will advice you to write something that your love, that makes you happy first, before others. Because, it's what makes you happy that allows you to hang on even when there may be no readers for your book...

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_93412 years ago
    Replied to makindeonirinwa

    At least 200 chapters or 300.. The main thing about internet novels are to make them long and deep. Shorter story hardly quench the taste of people especially since people are used to reading long novels...

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_93412 years ago
    Replied to makindeonirinwa

    Well, your other comment webnovel seem to have deleted it somehow, so I can't reply under it. I haven't read the ultimate striker... As for the ideas you gave, I will advise that you pay close attention to ranking novel and they to see the trope. Then you can align the trope to your ideas. But don't have high expectations...everything that happens here is maybe luck. I'm sorry for replying late... I don't come here often and I'm getting tired of webnovel...i have so many good novels and ideas but unfortunately, I also, I'm not favored... Good luck. One of the things that would bring out your novel would also be steady upload.

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_93412 years ago
    Replied to makindeonirinwa

    If it's something I can I help, I'll natural do it... So let me hear it first..

  • Bright_Gabriel_9341
    Bright_Gabriel_93412 years ago
    Replied to makindeonirinwa

    Go ahead

Gravity's Gambit

In a world where basketball is not just a game but a lifeline, Zed Mac rises from the shadows of abandonment to claim his throne as the king of the court. His father, a man driven by power, left Zed and his mother, convinced that his son would never amount to anything. But Zed defied those expectations, becoming a legendary player whose skills captivated the nation of Azagrut on the Khodour continent of Futuristic Parallel. However, just as Zed reaches the pinnacle of his career, a devastating nanobots injury orchestrated by his treacherous teammate, Gib, threatens to shatter his dreams. This betrayal forces Zed to confront the depths of his despair, leading him to a near-fatal encounter with a trial drug designed to heal him. In his darkest hour, he meets the Dimensional Simulator, a sentient system from a civilization 500 years ahead of his time, which offers him a chance to rewrite his fate. As Zed navigates the complexities of recovery, he discovers that the path to glory is fraught with challenges—both on and off the court. With the weight of his past and the expectations of a nation on his shoulders, he must learn to balance vengeance with redemption, and ambition with wisdom. In a society where augmented reality, virtual experiences, and holographic innovations redefine the game, Zed's journey becomes a testament to resilience and the relentless pursuit of greatness. Will Zed reclaim his title and rise above the betrayal, or will the forces of fate and technology conspire against him? Step into a world where basketball is everything, and witness a saga of struggle, triumph, and the magnetic balance of life itself. ------------ I hope you all find fulfillment in reading this piece of work, and I kindly ask for your support in the process.

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