Review Detail of ThePotatoKing in Dual Threat Genoiss

Okay so first of all you can see the inspiration from the Souls games, which I believe is a pretty fun thing. Other than that... the story seems to be pretty interesting do far, and the lore has a lot of potentials. However, I have to say that there is a lot of scope for improvement in the writing quality. There are a lot of grammatical errors which make the story a little hard to follow. Even if you get past that the first few chapters are really confusing, so I am not able to figure out what exactly is going on and the perspective keeps on shifting. I can understand if the author was trying to make that portion cryptic, mysterious and confusing in the first place. It's just that combined with all the grammar errors makes it really hard to follow. However once you get past the confusing bits, the story really picks up and is fun to read!