Review Detail of Jgewriter in Gaia: Reincarnated 99,999 Times As Punishment

Let's start off with the characters first. Adonis and Rune have great chemistry, it's how I imagine what a brother-brother interaction is like. They also seem to inspire each other, happily training with one another and at times sparring. Now to the writing, You capture fight scenes well, giving good details to show a vivid image in readers' imagination, however you know how to use words proficiently enough to capture an action without ruining the flow. There isn't anything else to nitpick, since every small shortcoming you might have will get fixed in the future.