Mate, it seems to early to give any critically analyzed review. And I wish the best and haste to the coming chapters. Although, if I am a bit honest, I am having second thoughts on adding your fic in my library, cause I was one of the first readers for your old Voldemort in MCU fic. And I have gone from having praise and recommending it to others, to actively boycotting and disclaimer it as a heresy on account of all JKR fans. So, please don't ruin this fic, that's all I ask. Happy writing.

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I gotta do it...

I don't feel like giving a long one so here goes. The only way I had seen this story working was the HPverse being weak, but you already decided to make Harry Potter important when in truth their magic is D-tier at best.

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stars are honest but I stopped reading it because after meeting hermoine for the first time he becomes like a really best friend and he wants to become harrys friend saying he's be a powerfull wizard. the sucking up to other behavior kills Bruce Wayns Carecter.Because McGonagall say mc is wealthier than most oldest and noble houses so why is he sucking up to others I don't get it.

forced situation , dialogues and unrealistic character personalities. The story went downhill from hp arc onwards. if you like a saint mc then go for it.

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I've wnjoyed your storues for quite a while, keep at it, never give up. don't listen to the hate comments and keep on keeping on. your stories are definitely worth a read and I cant wait to see where this one goes.

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