Review Detail of Tobi_One_Kenobi in Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan
Review detail
the way you write conversation and speech e.g Jake-"" yeah that was enough to put me off. someone commented on this in the second paragraph of the first chapter and you gave it a like, but on the second chapter you did the same thing. i tried to ignore but by chapter 15 i just couldnt handle it and skimmed to the end to see if you still continued and you did. so yeah 1 star, i could'nt enjoy anything. personally found it a complete waste of time
Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan
Ozonelayer
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you see, you liked the review. fam, usually when you like a comment, it means you acknowlage and appreciate the input given, and as an author, you apply that input in the next piece of work. to me it seems like you just skim what anyone writes about your story and then go on with your day . its.... annoying. so at leats rsspect that there are people that are not satisfied with the standards of your story and proceed to change what can be changed. and i think taking out names before speech is an easy fix. sucks that you're probably gonna skim this comment too and go to the next one. as it is right now, 600 people liked this story. and ita dissapointing to realize im never going to enjoy it as they did.
Yo my man I appreciate the input, and on my second novel I have improved the dialogue between characters, just wanted to say though that I’m slighty more than 20 chapters ahead of what i post here, so changing everything would be tedious and uncomfortable as that is how I wrote the dialogue between the character in this book. Anyways thxs for the review and well, hopefully when this novel ends and I start posting the second novel, you can come and read that one.👍🏾😘😍
Tobi_One_Kenobi:you see, you liked the review. fam, usually when you like a comment, it means you acknowlage and appreciate the input given, and as an author, you apply that input in the next piece of work. to me it seems like you just skim what anyone writes about your story and then go on with your day . its.... annoying. so at leats rsspect that there are people that are not satisfied with the standards of your story and proceed to change what can be changed. and i think taking out names before speech is an easy fix. sucks that you're probably gonna skim this comment too and go to the next one. as it is right now, 600 people liked this story. and ita dissapointing to realize im never going to enjoy it as they did.
Also the reason i like almost every comment is beacuse that tells me someone went out of their way to read my novel, and thats the reason why I made this novel in the first place.
Ozonelayer:Yo my man I appreciate the input, and on my second novel I have improved the dialogue between characters, just wanted to say though that I’m slighty more than 20 chapters ahead of what i post here, so changing everything would be tedious and uncomfortable as that is how I wrote the dialogue between the character in this book. Anyways thxs for the review and well, hopefully when this novel ends and I start posting the second novel, you can come and read that one.👍🏾😘😍
Ozonelayer:Yo my man I appreciate the input, and on my second novel I have improved the dialogue between characters, just wanted to say though that I’m slighty more than 20 chapters ahead of what i post here, so changing everything would be tedious and uncomfortable as that is how I wrote the dialogue between the character in this book. Anyways thxs for the review and well, hopefully when this novel ends and I start posting the second novel, you can come and read that one.👍🏾😘😍