Tobi_One_Kenobi

then you're being too descriptive with this, and alot of the time, it seems like you're just repeating the same points from earlier chapters but with different adjectives. i mean, all that's been happening on repeat so far is , "he enjoys sunlight." , Mark saying he's not old enough to play, and his dad says he's strong. read through it again if you dont beleive me.

youve just written the same chapter 4 times at this point.Yo story aint progressing.

stop using chatgpt so often

his story fell off after all that multiverse shit

what are you doing instead of updating ur lookism story😒

bro???

this is good, ur talented .please dont die.

running 10k doesn't have to be around the city bro, he can just do laps on a counpound

not all private school students are rich, some just have extremely self-sacrificing parents, im saying this as a poor private school student with extremely self-sacrificing parents.

i dont want to spoil it too much but he's not a villain, all for one framed him