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This review is only based on plot and plot holes. (I'm not giving it on writing quality or grammar as they aren't matter if the story itself doesn't have much.) So let's start. It start with. Author giving Mc overpowered wish. ( Lssj+ ancient ssj_ what ever that it) combined. ( which he patheticly Nerfed which I'll talk in a moment) Mc asked to be in an harsh environment( as in 10 to 100x planet Vegeta Gravity, and such which is actually good ( but wasn't executive properly) As his parents lived there for 4 year ( give or take few) and still had a pl under 50k Any dbz fan knows thats a heavy nerf ( goku in 6 days went from 9k to 90k iirc under same 100x gravity of earth and they have areas which have gravity over 20 x and more of P.V .. THATS 200 X of earth ) This story is Heavily surrounded by the element of Nerf to its characters. Unnecessary/ easily avoidable plot holes, and as much of fonon lore as author could add, which in tern makes the background of dbz meaningless. And if asked why such nerf, the answer is Mc won't have an opponent or such iirc from paragraph comments. And my question is then why gave LSSJ and the ancient Saiyan ( what ever that is but I expect it to be equally strong if not stronger) and what we get ? 25k BPL at birth, seriously? And after 4 years it around 140k . Thats all, I ain't gonna spoile more.

Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan

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The author nerfed too much and that made the story very boring but what to do since the story is not bad and he keeps doing chapters which is very rare and the story has more good points than bad

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I find it interesting that all the negative reviews have large numbers of upvotes and all the positives have like one or two. And the negative reviews tend to have explanations for what's wrong with the story while the positive reviews are just things like emoji or "nice" or "It's good".

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it's because the average webnovel reader is as dumb as a brick

midgetydeath:I find it interesting that all the negative reviews have large numbers of upvotes and all the positives have like one or two. And the negative reviews tend to have explanations for what's wrong with the story while the positive reviews are just things like emoji or "nice" or "It's good".
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and because of the wishes that the mc asked for, he should have at least a few million or billions of Pl

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at birth

VXZD_ZD:and because of the wishes that the mc asked for, he should have at least a few million or billions of Pl