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AutumnX
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2022-05-08 08:50

imma be completely honest I wasn't expecting much, but as I got deeper into the chapter I found myself fixated on nothing else but the chapter itself. lost in the dimension of the storms. By the time i snapped back into reality i was already finished with the chapter, i was dumb founded where has the chapter went? how could it finish so fast? until i came into realization... no. this cant be. Is this the story I've been searching for my whole life?!! A story cant be this good without a system included. A story with a refreshing concept that hasn't been abused. A STORY THAT I CAN ACTUALLY LOOK FORWARD TOO!!!

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RubicS
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Raising_Moon
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I am highly appreciative of your comment Wise One. I hope you immerse yourself in the mystical world that I've created. I'll be looking out for your future reviews/comments.

Aeonon
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You have described my thought very well! I have also lost myself in this novel and did not even realize it when I neared the end. I sobbed in grief and literally went through all the stages of grief. All within a couple of seconds. My mind and body were souring through so many emotions. I was flooded. This novel has enlightened me, and it has made my life so much brighter. I am now empty and soon hope to be fulfilled when new chapters get released.

Currupted_psycocat
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Voy a ser completamente honesto, no esperaba mucho, pero a medida que profundizaba en el capítulo me encontré obsesionado con nada más que el capítulo en sí. perdido en la dimensión de las tormentas. Cuando volví a la realidad, ya había terminado con el capítulo, era tonto, ¿adónde ha ido el capítulo? ¿Cómo podría terminar tan rápido? Hasta que me di cuenta... no. Esto no puede ser. ¿Es esta la historia que he estado buscando toda mi vida? Una historia no puede ser tan buena sin un sistema incluido. Una historia con un concepto refrescante del que no se ha abusado. ¡¡¡UNA HISTORIA QUE YO TAMBIÉN PUEDO ESPERAR!!!

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Descargar aplicación Detalle de la revisión AutumnX Lv1 21d Voy a ser completamente honesto, no esperaba mucho, pero a medida que profundizaba en el capítulo me encontré obsesionado con nada más que el capítulo en sí. perdido en la dimensión de las tormentas. Cuando volví a la realidad, ya había terminado con el capítulo, era tonto, ¿adónde ha ido el capítulo? ¿Cómo podría terminar tan rápido? Hasta que me di cuenta... no. Esto no puede ser. ¿Es esta la historia que he estado buscando toda mi vida? Una historia no puede ser tan buena sin un sistema incluido. Una historia con un concepto refrescante del que no se ha abusado. ¡¡¡UNA HISTORIA QUE YO TAMBIÉN PUEDO ESPERAR!!! Tormenta cautivadora Raising_Moon Le gusta a 14 personas Similares Respuestas6 Invitado_396 Lv1 Invitado_396: efigie Ahora RubicS Lv2 😏 19d Raising_Moon Escritor Agradezco mucho su comentario Wise One. Espero que te sumerjas en el mundo místico que he creado. Estaré a la espera de sus futuras reseñas/comentarios. 19d Eonón Lv3 ¡Has descrito muy bien mi pensamiento! También me he perdido en esta novela y ni siquiera me di cuenta cuando me acerqué al final. Llocé de dolor y literalmente pasé por todas las etapas del dolor. Todo en un par de segundos. Mi mente y mi cuerpo se agriaban a través de tantas emociones. Estaba inundado. Esta novela me ha iluminado y ha hecho que mi vida sea mucho más brillante. Ahora estoy vacío y pronto espero que se cumpla cuando se publiquen nuevos capítulos. 19d Invitado_396 Lv1 Voy a ser completamente honesto, no esperaba mucho, pero a medida que profundizaba en el capítulo me encontré obsesionado con nada más que el capítulo en sí. perdido en la dimensión de las tormentas. Cuando volví a la realidad, ya había terminado con el capítulo, era tonto, ¿adónde ha ido el capítulo? ¿Cómo podría terminar tan rápido? Hasta que me di cuenta... no. Esto no puede ser. ¿Es esta la historia que he estado buscando toda mi vida? Una historia no puede ser tan buena sin un sistema incluido. Una historia con un concepto refrescante del que no se ha abusado. ¡¡¡UNA HISTORIA QUE YO TAMBIÉN PUEDO ESPERAR!!! 1 min Invitado_396 Lv1 Ahora Detalle de la reseña de AutumnX en una tormenta cautivadora

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