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IrgendeinTyp
IrgendeinTypLv151yrIrgendeinTyp

The writing quality is really bad and the author really needs a proofreader or at least use some software like grammarly if they want to take money for this. Especially since chapter cost 11 coins which is more than most properly proofread books on this site. The story in itself is quite good though and keeps one engaged with the novel despite the bad writing quality and occasional copy pasted word definition from Merriam Webster or Wikipedia that the author tries to pass of as the characters having deep insight into some topics or something. This book is clearly just a hobby and if it was free It would deserve a 5/10. but since it isn't (and on top of that it's quite expensive) I would give it a 3/10.

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Heavenly Kingdom: The Kingdom among the clouds

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IrgendeinTyp
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By the way, that's 0.21€ per chapter or 9.48€ until chapter 60.

Moe_Cyan_Pile
Moe_Cyan_PileLv3Moe_Cyan_Pile

The writing quality that, i can improve on and your other point as well. but sadly. i don't decide the prices. Webnovel does. each chapter is written on 2000 - 2100 words each. webnovel places a coin each 200 words. Sorry, but i really can't change the prices for the chapter.

IrgendeinTyp:By the way, that's 0.21€ per chapter or 9.48€ until chapter 60.