Review Detail of RobynCardona in Pursuing My Rejected Alpha

Wow, I couldn't stop reading. The writing is a m a z i n g! I love the dynamics between the two alphas (*waves Lucien flag*). The world building is stellar and everything feels natural. Background information is brought in subtly and does not impede the story at all. For once, I have no constructive critiscm for the author, everything seems perfect.