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RobynCardona

RobynCardona

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2020-08-18 JoinedGermany
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Replied to Nekozushi

    Now that's an interesting take you got there! I'll let you continue cook that take for now 😋

    He walked up to her. "Would you have just continued to seduce me, poison me with sweet words? Until you have given birth to your successor?" By now, Alric had gotten dangerously close to her. His blue eyes were sparkling with suppressed fury.
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    How I Became the Succubus' Alpha and Saved the World
    Fantasy · RobynCardona
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Replied to Nekozushi

    Thank you for observing this! :-) I tried to incorporate their mythological backgrounds to a certain degree!

    He walked up to her. "Would you have just continued to seduce me, poison me with sweet words? Until you have given birth to your successor?" By now, Alric had gotten dangerously close to her. His blue eyes were sparkling with suppressed fury.
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    How I Became the Succubus' Alpha and Saved the World
    Fantasy · RobynCardona
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Replied to oaterbalore
    Yet serenity was never meant to last. With furrowed brows, the angel in the white business suit turned his attention to the glass tablet screen in his hands.
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    How I Became the Succubus' Alpha and Saved the World
    Fantasy · RobynCardona
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
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    "So it seems," Gabriel responded to the enthusiastic angel slowly while he was helped out of the limousine by the chauffeur. "And, to be honest, I had wished you wouldn't have invited me for another game. I'm slowly growing tired of this, Lucifer."
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    How I Became the Succubus' Alpha and Saved the World
    Fantasy · RobynCardona
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented

    Yes! More trouble! You better watch out Lulu

    Ch 26 The Alpha Had To Take Another Rejection
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented

    You better be... These dads need to take a back seat đŸ˜€

    "I am sorry... Lulu, I am so sorry... Your father is incapable. I am so sorry..."
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented

    Famous last words...

    Well, it was simply a mistake made by the Moon Goddess. There was no way they could end up together.
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented

    Oh no o:

    "Lucien, Dane Silverback called yesterday."
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Posted

    Well-written novel that takes its time with introducing the protagonists. The chapters are structured in such a way that it's easy to follow the changing perspectives. Keep up the good work, author! Your world-building is awesome!

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    Morland: Blood and Sweat
    Fantasy · Micaol
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Posted

    The story starts off with a loud bang! Very dense storytelling which is perfect for this scenario. The world building is super intriguing and am looking forward to finding out more! Keep going, author!

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    Hidden In The Shadows Of The Past
    Fantasy · babydragon25
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Posted

    The author uses flowery language that is typical for Chinese novels. I really loved it! I wished more authors would write this poetically. There were some grammar and spelling errors that threw me off, however. The protagonist cones off as quite an unlikeable (to me) brat, but that will probably change after his transmigration 😁 The story is dense (despite the flowery language!) and mirrors the atmosphere and protagonist's lifestyle. The legend used as a story hook is beautiful and creative. Please keep up the good work!

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    (BL) Transmigration: Latent Intrinsic Love
    History · jungkooks_luna
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Replied to Lu_Shui

    As if you needed a rally team to claim what's yours 😏

    Ch 22 Two Marriage Proposals
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented

    Team Ronan! đŸș

    Ch 22 Two Marriage Proposals
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Posted

    This is a stellar novel! It starts slow which allows you to understand how important the MC's relationship to his mother is. The character design is 3-dimensional and doesn't lose itself in tropes. The moment things start to pick up, I first thought it was going to be something akin to the Planet of the Apes, but the plot twist was surprisingly refreshing! The writing is good, you can see the author is experienced in describing both feelings and atmospheres. The action scenes felt grueling - in a good way 👍 Keep up the good work!

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    Guardians of Nightmares
    Fantasy · Nikola_Niko
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented

    I really love how sassy and self-confident Ferrin's mom is!!!

    Aria pointed her finger towards the man and said through gritted teeth, "You had the guts to say that right now. Say it again and I will rip out your tongue!"
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    Guardians of Nightmares
    Fantasy · Nikola_Niko
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented

    Lol I read that in my mother's voice. The memory đŸ˜©

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    Guardians of Nightmares
    Fantasy · Nikola_Niko
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Posted

    Super intriguing premise. The author has woven folklore and mythical creatures from all around the world into one, which I like a lot! They also take the opportunity to explain the "main chapter creature". I didn't think any chapter was scary at all. Rather, I felt, everything was magical and wondrous - perhaps because I'm a mythological creature fan myself and knew almost every type of "monster" the author introduced. 😅 The changing perspective between characters is surprisingly easy to follow and has never been an issue during reading. On the contrary, it provides better insight to the situation at hand. Some chapters are long and story-driven, others are more poetic, displaying the excellent writing skills of the author. However, there is a plethora of characters introduced on top of the creatures which made it difficult to not get confused. Introducing new characters late into the story was also a little challenging for me, as I felt their introduction was rushed. It could have used one or two more chapters to narrate the broken relationship mentioned in ch30 instead of squeezing it all into a footnote.

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    Through the Unyielding Gate
    Fantasy · Patricia_Levy
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented

    What an evil cliffhanger!

    Ch 21 The Unexpected Visit
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Replied to Lu_Shui
    "Write me a proposal with similar terms to the Silent Walkers Pack," Ronan cut Jake mid-sentence.
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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  • RobynCardona
    RobynCardona1yr
    Commented
    "Write me a proposal with similar terms to the Silent Walkers Pack," Ronan cut Jake mid-sentence.
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    Pursuing My Rejected Alpha
    LGBT+ · Lu_Shui
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