Reveal spoiler

I'm only giving this review because the author wrote something incredibly stupid and doesn't understand how Pokemon types work (look chapter 5 comments). Although this novel has many similarities to my story, that's not a problem for me. but why are you insulting my story when you take so many ideas from my story.(especially the gym badges system was adopted almost 1 to 1 and happens to appear a few months later when i first introduced this system to my story) It's okay to bring other people's ideas into your story, but making fun of my story afterwards isn't cool. I'll still try to rate the story fairly, even though I'm no longer interested in reading it afterwards.

The grammar of this book is incredible. Everything has been written in great detail and it has a smooth explanation. The system is amazing, although it makes me anxious when it speaks and stresses out our Mc. The Mc is very likeable, a simple human being, the author did a good job expressing his feelings. I was able to feel each one of them as if I was almost in the book. It worked for me. Nice references to Team Rocket brought back good childhood memories for me, was a good experience hehe The paragraphs and chapters were not too long and it has a perfect flow of pov. It's easy to understand who's speaking and when. 😌 I am following your updates! 🦋

A bit too much of legendary/alternate timeline shenanigans right from the start imo. Except for that the first 8 chapter are well written even if the pace is a bit slow but since you have to explain all the settings i can understand that.

Started off good But too many legendary pkmn in the plot from the start ch1 and also there are signs of other transmigrators The power scaling and system is good and the way the author writes is entertaing to read Overall it's good and I really want to continue reading it but the above mentioned reasons is holding me back Still, Good work author 👍

i can say it is a good story BUT I felt the story itself was too forced. when the mc gets a Regional Pokémon with a high Rating, or for example when meeting meowth or meeting lance. the system itself was pretty good, but it could be better if the rewards from the quests were reduced. so that mc does not become strong instantly, but gradually.

First of all this fanfiction is good. Now somethings that 'I' think could have been better, 1. Mc's emotions, really, he was crying, panicking and distributed when he first arrived at pokemon world, but suddenly he became normal. Even when talking to Professor Sam, he was not panicking because of what just happened, felt like mc is emotionless when it comes to these dangerous situations, it was his first time being attacked by a high level pokemon (as a normal earth guy). 2. Legendary pokemon fighting was a point where I can see many people leaving, like I know this fiction is good, but if you read futher chapters, then you can ignore that part. I just skipped all that. 3. Now the main thing, everyone not being suspicious is a big problem, like I know prof. Sam doesn't have to be suspicious of mc, but mc not being cautious even after getting knocked out just as they arrived at the camp was really weird part for me in that chapter. Mc doesn't even know if prof. Sam is good or bad guy in that world, how can he believe him. 4. If rather than just giving the ranks, all that red, puple stats. information in an auxiliary chapter, it should have been better if mc could get it himself, like getting it from pokemon center or someone telling him. So, basically problem lies in the way mc react or how he knows all that thing about potential and all, other than that its more or less good fiction. So, that was my opinion and other than that later chaters are getting better. Oh, and don't take this comment offensively if I ised some words in a wrong way, I was just giving opinion from my side.

Pokemon being one of my favorite things from childhood into adulthood made this story an instant read for me. I went in judging harshly but found myself completely immersed right away. I can picture the original animation style of Pokemon flying across the screen of my mind's eye because of how well you describe action and surroundings. There's the beautiful innocence of Pokemon as a whole introduced to the bleak reality of adult experiences in this story and I will be hooked for a long time. 🤍

Good 👍👍👍👍 .