Review Detail of Jujumaster in My Omni-Ability System in a Parallel World

I'm currently on chapter 5. I commend the pace of the story and the dialogue. but the cons of the chapter I just read through are the grammatical errors, lack of character description and world design. it feels like a normal person reading a movie script. Overall, I'm happy with what I read😊😊 The opening chapters set up a war between parallel realms. let's go🔥🔥