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The story is great so far and the idea of it is quite fascinating. The power seems amazing so far being in the middle of to op and not too op. The only con I have with this novel is that the MC lacks intelligence. I mean, a simple analysis could render a conclusion with any event here that would've saved time preventing him from asking questions and progressing the story faster. Although it's a good way to show info dumps it makes the MC's intelligence look so low. The MC is too bullied by the story that it doesn't show much growth. In a good story, there should be a rise and fall, fall being bullied and rise to show the growth of the MC but with this novel its almost like fall fall fall fall rise fall fall fall.
My Omni-Ability System in a Parallel World
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Thank you so much, I can see your point. Actually, it's because the story is still at it's beginner level. Imagine if this book has 300chaps and the first 30chaps includes how the MC is being bullied but suddenly, he rose up and became strong. In most of the novels I've read, e.g Reincarnated with the strongest system, My Vampire system, My Dragon System... The MC is mostly bullied in the first 20 to 30 chapters of the book. And to be honest, the MC of My Omni-Ability system wasn't bullied, he's being threatened to join the leagues of the strongest students of the school which he abruptly refuses. Instead of him being bullied, his friends and those who were weak were bullied so he could join their league. * * Thank you so much for the review, I'm so grateful.[img=recommend][img=recommend]