Review Detail of proking in My Omni-Ability System in a Parallel World

According to the four chapters I have read, the story is quite intriguing and interesting. However, I felt it was a bit too rushed and there were lots of info dumps in between. It could've been much more better if the author explained things slowly and let the reader understand everything properly. With proper descriptions and depictions of emotions, it could do wonders. And I must say the novel has a lot of potential if it's done right. I really love the concept of parallel worlds and the ability to travel through dimensions. I hope the author improves the quality and makes it much more exciting. I suggest the author to read novels and see how the other top authors do the story telling. It'll be helpful for you. All the best.