Review Detail of Leylin_Farlier99 in Marvel: The Gamer Sorcerer

well, this fic has potential but personally do not like it but I would try to be neutral while giving the review. The Grammer is excellent with no mistakes, which alone makes it much better than 99 percent of fics and novels on this app. as for story development, well it is very subjective if you like it or not, I wouldn't go into details or it may spoil reading experience of others. but tye Mc was reborn in marvel and he decided to be selfish and one day when he was dead tired he didn't save a pregnant lady thinking that others will save her and she died and was made onto a vengeful soul by some higher power, and due to her death Mc broke down by guilt of not saving her(like who even gives a Damm if a random person died, like if you knew them it is natural to feel broken but that lady was a complete stranger) and thus he went to his own ruin and lost his GF and thus decided to unalive himself and that lady's ghost tried to kill him and he was saved by a mage from kamar Taj and he got gamer system. now he wants to redeem himself and be a protector and all that cr*p. if you like a Mc that has justice and redemption on his mind all the time, you'll love this, but if you think that Mc doing all of this cause of a stranger lady isn't realistic then you wouldn't be able to read it.