PurfectoCat

thanks for the chap looking forward to the fights🤗

tftc

ttfc

thanks for the chapter

I liked the way how in the first chapter the MC reincarnated. There was no overdrawn fight scene between OCs that nobody cares about in the first chapter, there was just enough tension to tell us the reader what was going on. There was also no meeting ROB and having an awkward conversation with ROB and getting wishes. It felt nice how the frustration the MC had turned out to be 'wishes' at the end. The idea is pretty interesting, I don't think I've read a story with this power set: Sukuna's power and Azmuth's intelligence. I enjoyed the first chap. The direction you have decided to push the story (Minato, Kushina alive) is something I look forward to read. Thank god it is not one of those 'see how much Naruto suffered in the village' kinda fanfic. Those have become very tiresome to read tbh. The MC also ain't some normal guy from the looks of it and it seems he won't have a hard time adapting to the shinobi world as he seems accustomed to killing. But he has also shown emotions, so he isn't the totally machine-like emotionless killer which is relieving. He wasn't overly emotional though and the way he portrayed his emotion felt real enough for a man of his supposed background. That's all for now. Good luck!

well, I'd recommend you to come back sometime later because you have just boiled down the character into the same old traditional hero which he is not

hehe

Normal human nature~I don't think someone has died because of you?

character development~

bruh...if he doesn't get to the end of things he gon get killed that is what I am saying...that's what I am showing subtly