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EsZeus
EsZeusLv152yr
2022-09-06 22:33

Overall: A solid 4* But I can say one thing for sure: The MC is quite dumb. I am a logical person and find myself very often frustrated reading about how the MC is reacting or how she does certain things. Another thing I find kind of annoying are the small but plenty written mistakes. The best example is instead of "tried", the author is ALWAYS writing "tired". I think it could be auto correction from a third party software, but this just shows the Author is not even reading her/his own work after writing. Not even once. It has a lot of slice of life, the description of the world is colourful, but the MC is doing a lot of things without any brain. You will stumble upon a lot of plot armor therefore. But: I just hope Author-san improves more and at least reads his own written work at least once for getting rid of all those small but sad grammar mistakes :)

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Empyrium
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Yeah, with the grammar author is truly trash, he/she just doesnt care at all

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