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vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor3yr
2022-05-08 13:35

First review from the author:- What this web novel has - Overpowered MC with a cold personality but will be warm to his family and friends. - Mysterious past that makes readers always change their thoughts. - System and Game elements. - Revenge. Mc wants revenge; however, he was not completely crazy in his thirst for revenge - Monsters/ Beasts. The world is filled will all kinds of monsters and beasts. - Romance. No spoilers about the Female lead for now. - Loyal friends/ Beast companions. Overall, I will try to make it as good and as interesting as possible. If you still have any doubts, you can ask below. Thank you.

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KING_RIP_is1
KING_RIP_is1Lv4

even if mc is cold to everyone it doesn't matter as long as it feels human...please make character that feels human not some NPC.their personality doesn't matter even an idiot mc is fine as long as he is introduced in that way imagine mc introduced as light yagami n behave like Naruto or introduced as Naruto and he behaves like light yagami,

KING_RIP_is1
KING_RIP_is1Lv4

even if mc is cold to everyone it doesn't matter as long as it feels human...please make character that feels human not some NPC.their personality doesn't matter even an idiot mc is fine as long as he is introduced in that way imagine mc introduced as light yagami n behave like Naruto or introduced as Naruto and he behaves like light yagami,

B0r3d_Guy_1
B0r3d_Guy_1Lv13

that kid in the gif must have a system thats ehy he's doing that. there is no other possible explanation. We can laugh at him now but in the future when he cures cancer and makes hovercars he will be the one laughing at us for looking down on him.🤣🤣

Viriti
ViritiLv3

is the mc going to be making his family/friends op alongside him.. I dont mind if either of them get strong, on their own paths, but when an mc just straight up gives them power, like: 'hey, here's this ancient dragon heart, eat it and you will become an ancient dragon capable of birthing worlds! no need to question me, I'm mc.', I hate that kind of thing.

Dee_xterity
Dee_xterityLv4

harem or no harem

Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

#Noharem or #Harem ?? I hope this not a harem

Dragon8992
Dragon8992Lv15

Hi author I can’t see any characteristics description as in hair colour of the person colour of The Eye etc?

vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

I gave the brief description of mc in the first chapter and the other important characters will be given slowly as the story progresses.

Dragon8992:Hi author I can’t see any characteristics description as in hair colour of the person colour of The Eye etc?
ClumsyYutsu
ClumsyYutsuLv3

is there no discord?

vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

No discord.

ClumsyYutsu:is there no discord?
Nate_Gong
Nate_GongLv12

sad, I am

vinayraj:No discord.
ForceRecon
ForceReconLv1

Can you expand on the #strongactingweak tag, does that play a big role?

Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv14

Harem?

UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11

i know im asking little much more but too many fighting scene take toll on reader mind lose ability to read can it be something else? for example reading lores and eating snacks improving life style

ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

How long will the MC hide strength identity, is it revealed in any of the released chapters?

LordGrimm_XI
LordGrimm_XILv4

Has the fl appeared yet?

vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

potential FLs appeared.

LordGrimm_XI:Has the fl appeared yet?
vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

no spoilers.

ShamelessGengar:How long will the MC hide strength identity, is it revealed in any of the released chapters?
GonGaming
GonGamingLv2

😊👍

LordGrimm_XI
LordGrimm_XILv4

More than 1 fl? I hope this Isnt harem

vinayraj:potential FLs appeared.
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