So first, writing quality. It's perfect, but that's to be expected of a novel with 5 editors and proofreaders. Second, stability of updates, to me, it looks like all this was published a few days ago, so I really can't say anything about stability of updates yet due to recency. Story development is only interesting so far, maybe because it's just not my type of novel, but I felt like I was slugging through the 34 chaps. Character design is fine, each character has their own personality and is unique, just, there are way too many, and I honestly had trouble remembering who was who. Finally, we'll end on a good note with the world background, the best part of this novel. It's super intricate and I really can tell that the author spent a lot of time on it. Honestly, a really impressive world that's both unique and expansive. Overall, if you like this genre of novel, then it's a must read. But if you don't, then it's just really a sludge fest.
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LIKEThank you for your kind words, I will endeavor to fullfill your expectations. Welcome to the paladins Sup edgelord! All of them are part time though so most chaps havent been edited yet. The auxilliary volume is expected to be a slog though. As those were the original chapters before the rewrite. Still thank you for reading Welcome to the paladins.
Alright, thanks
I also do free proofreads if you want it.