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ShadowFlux1909
ShadowFlux1909Lv411mth
2024-04-30 14:58

Pretty trash NGL. Came looking for something to read. Start reading, Writing style for the next 50 chapters is Script style. The Author writes like a 12 year old with a power fantasy, and the grammar sucks. The Story got boring really fast, Might as well read harem garbage. Writing: 1/5 Entertainment: 1/5 Character Design: 1/5 Story: 1/5 World 1/5

In Marvel as Ultimate Skill Raphael

Akros_Zero
4.0
80 Chs

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Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroAuthor

cough, I said I wrote it's 50 or so chapters at the beginning of my writing career

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Huntsman
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The sypnosis is wrong, the Avengers didn't attack him because he's Ultron, they attacked him because he decided to act like a genocial cringelord for no reason other than... Well, REASONS. Don't ask me, I don't know why. He said he didn't want to be OP instantly, but then he gave himself all the possible Resistance Skills, two entire Chaps about 3K words each were spent on watching create new OP Skills, then he went on to absorb the Mind Stoneโ€“ One of the Singularities left after the Universe's creation with little to no trouble. Well, what did I even expect from a Fic who the first being the MC met is supposed to be the TrUE GoD who the OAA is supposedly just an extension of him or whatever. This Fic is like Junk-Food, it's good to consume if you don't care and just want an OP Protag who will probably steamroll his way through the Multiverse to satisfy your craving, but I won't recommend turning on your brain midway, or you might get an aneurysm.

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AEEK
AEEKLv4

Wow ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜. .. ... Nice Story . .. . i Love Tensura so obviously 5 Star. Raphael is OG, Don't Drop, . . and Keep up the good work.

2yr
AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

Writing quality needs improvement. Does ruin the experience somewhat, but the story itself is understandable. Updates? Need more. Always need more. Not enough. Always h u n g r y. Story development is mostly fine. Some characters are inaccurate somewhat, mostly due to bad english probably.

2yr
Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1

cringe with your MC bro, a literal edgelord with OP powers. the system sheet takes up almost half the chapter, it needs to be summarized again. the reader will be bored if half the chapter only contains the status of the mc and the system.

2yr
Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv14

Not my cup of tea โ˜•๏ธ โ€”โ€œโ€-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€”-โ€œโ€-โ€œ-โ€œโ€-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€”โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€”โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€”โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ/โ€œ/โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ/โ€œ-โ€œ/โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€”โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€”โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œ-โ€œโ€”โ€œ-โ€œ-

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SMomoTempest
SMomoTempestLv14

In short, mc reincarting in marvel with Tensura power, genderless and name himself Rachel. So in summary MC is A PSYCHOPATH THAT KILL EVERY MAGOR CHARACTER IN MARVEL AND THEY IS COUNTLESS DUMB PLOT. But it's a bit good starting at chapter 20+ but BECOME SUPER BAD SRYLE AGAIN *Sob* ๐Ÿ˜ญ, THIS AUTHOR DESTROYED MY Rimuru into a Dumb Stupid and psychopath mc. Sigh i made a huge mistake on reding this stupid novel.

2yr
Colin_Stooh
Colin_StoohLv14

Imma be 100% honest, itโ€™s a good idea but the story isnโ€™t written to its best potential, and the grammar is kinda hard to follow and worsens the story but still, good job author Iโ€™m not gonna write a super hateful review bc I donโ€™t have the ability to write a good story so Iโ€™m not gonna be mean

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_GLT_
_GLT_Lv1

good--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
VonBritannia
VonBritanniaLv14

writing style and grammer was as good as you can get. story is just unbearable, because of two words, edgelord mc. the author says in a q&a chapter his rational but tbh the explanation was just as bad. marvel fanfics for some reason always tend to either be edgelord psycho trash or simp mega hero. this on was the first category.

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