Item: In Marvel as Ultimate Skill Raphael
Rating: 3
Author: SMomoTempest

SMomoTempestLv142yr

2023-02-12 04:35

In short, mc reincarting in marvel with Tensura power, genderless and name himself Rachel. So in summary MC is A PSYCHOPATH THAT KILL EVERY MAGOR CHARACTER IN MARVEL AND THEY IS COUNTLESS DUMB PLOT. But it's a bit good starting at chapter 20+ but BECOME SUPER BAD SRYLE AGAIN *Sob* 😭, THIS AUTHOR DESTROYED MY Rimuru into a Dumb Stupid and psychopath mc. Sigh i made a huge mistake on reding this stupid novel.

In Marvel as Ultimate Skill Raphael

Akros_Zero

4.0

79 Chs

Liked by 11 people

Replies2

Akros_ZeroAuthor

Bro didn't you read that Mc asked to be reborn as Rimuru with the perks of a Cosmic being? That means a mindset of a Comsic being as well, and what do you mean by Psycopath? Just because he killed whole Avengers and all soldiers who were hunting him doesn't makes him a Psycopath you don't even understand how real Psycopaths are

2yr

Mr_MinotaurLv4

Dawg it’s your story but it’s kinda disappointing like a burnt cake. As in you can cut apart the cake and enjoy some of the filling but overall it’s kind of meh. Good luck in your future work

Akros_Zero:Bro didn't you read that Mc asked to be reborn as Rimuru with the perks of a Cosmic being? That means a mindset of a Comsic being as well, and what do you mean by Psycopath? Just because he killed whole Avengers and all soldiers who were hunting him doesn't makes him a Psycopath you don't even understand how real Psycopaths are

1yr

Other Reviews

HuntsmanLv2

The sypnosis is wrong, the Avengers didn't attack him because he's Ultron, they attacked him because he decided to act like a genocial cringelord for no reason other than... Well, REASONS. Don't ask me, I don't know why. He said he didn't want to be OP instantly, but then he gave himself all the possible Resistance Skills, two entire Chaps about 3K words each were spent on watching create new OP Skills, then he went on to absorb the Mind Stone– One of the Singularities left after the Universe's creation with little to no trouble. Well, what did I even expect from a Fic who the first being the MC met is supposed to be the TrUE GoD who the OAA is supposedly just an extension of him or whatever. This Fic is like Junk-Food, it's good to consume if you don't care and just want an OP Protag who will probably steamroll his way through the Multiverse to satisfy your craving, but I won't recommend turning on your brain midway, or you might get an aneurysm.

2yr

AEEKLv4

Wow 🤩😍. .. ... Nice Story . .. . i Love Tensura so obviously 5 Star. Raphael is OG, Don't Drop, . . and Keep up the good work.

2yr

AnotherAtlasLv2

Writing quality needs improvement. Does ruin the experience somewhat, but the story itself is understandable. Updates? Need more. Always need more. Not enough. Always h u n g r y. Story development is mostly fine. Some characters are inaccurate somewhat, mostly due to bad english probably.

2yr

Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1

cringe with your MC bro, a literal edgelord with OP powers. the system sheet takes up almost half the chapter, it needs to be summarized again. the reader will be bored if half the chapter only contains the status of the mc and the system.

2yr

Queen_KarinaLv14

Not my cup of tea ☕️ —“”-“-“-“-“-“—-“”-“-“”-“-“-“-“-“-“”-“-“-“—“-“-“-“-“-“-“—“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“—“-“-“-“-“-“-“/“/“-“-“-“/“-“/“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“—“-“-“-“-“-“”-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“-“—“-“-“-“-“-“”-“-“-“-“—“-“-

2yr

Colin_StoohLv14

Imma be 100% honest, it’s a good idea but the story isn’t written to its best potential, and the grammar is kinda hard to follow and worsens the story but still, good job author I’m not gonna write a super hateful review bc I don’t have the ability to write a good story so I’m not gonna be mean

2yr

_GLT_Lv1

good--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr

VonBritanniaLv14

writing style and grammer was as good as you can get. story is just unbearable, because of two words, edgelord mc. the author says in a q&a chapter his rational but tbh the explanation was just as bad. marvel fanfics for some reason always tend to either be edgelord psycho trash or simp mega hero. this on was the first category.

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